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Reviews for Forgotten Buddha

By : talxthorn
  • From ANON - BabyBlueRowen on June 16, 2006
    More please!
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  • From ANON - jarm on January 01, 2006
    please hurry to finish this, it is great.
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  • From ANON - starrchild on December 20, 2005
    loved the flashback..love the way you write Sanzo and Hakkai. Chapter Six before Xmas, maybe(hint,hint)
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  • From ANON - jarm on December 19, 2005
    oh i hope someone gets a good spanking out of all this ruckus.
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  • From ANON - squirrl on June 15, 2005
    I love this story! I hope you continue it!
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  • From ANON - MystWynd on May 26, 2004
    I hail from the Saiyuki Yaoi ML. I figured I'd give your fic a try, and I find it well done. I don't see anything wrong with your grammer at all. Though you punctuation could use a bit of work, you tend to over punctuate. Very easily remedied, just read your story back out loud. Punctuations when read will cause you to stop and pause or take a breath; if there are too many pauses, or too few pauses, then eliminate a comma or add one where neccessary. That was a bit of advise from one of my english teachers that I've found works for me, especially since I don't have a beta. >_< Well anyway, looking forward to reading more.

    -MystWynd
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  • From ANON - Nikki on May 15, 2004
    Wow, how great a story this is. I love that you have Hakkai doing this, it's so funny, and sad. I like the demon attack and them all going to sleep. Please post more soon, I am very curious as to where this will end up.
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  • From ANON - Nikki on April 30, 2004
    Tal and Thorn, I think you need to keep posting this, and I will keep reading it. I don't understand what others were complaining about, I think the writting is very good, although I will admit I am slightly confused as to what is going on, but I figure if this is over 20 chappies, I will figure it out. Is this strictly a Sanzo/Hakkai pairing? I will admit, everyone has their favorites and this isn't mine, however I find the story interesting enough that I will continue to read. If you ever do a Goku/Sanzo I'll be sure to read too! Anyway, I would like to see more of this, so please continue!
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  • From ANON - Cheyenne Danct on March 04, 1920
    Hello,

    I thought I'd visit after hearing a little about the story from the saiyuki yaoi list.

    I don't normally read Hakkai/Sanzou preferring Gojyo to be in the mix somewhere, whether with Hakkai or Sanzou doesn't really matter. ^_^

    However, your story flows very well. I enjoyed the overall tone, the setting and the hints of Hakkai's and Sanzou's prior meeting.

    Cheyenne
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  • From ANON - darkeichibi451 on April 24, 2004
    rock on! I know this from FF. If it's here now we must be in store for some hot Yaoi action. Do i hear Sanzo/Goyjo maybe?
    I've read ahead I know Sanzo is already struggling with both feelings for Goku ankkaikkai. What about the water sprite?
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