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Reviews for Checkmate: Royal Aquisition

By : Kyattochan
  • From ANON - Puppybaddog on November 25, 2005
    I don't think I need to tell you to hurry up and update I'm sure you've read a lot of those, you should go at your own pace and the excitement of waiting to read the next chapter is always there...anyways I just figured since it's been months since you updated just wanted to tell you that I and many others LOVE this story, and we hope you can update soon before we forget our place in the story...wonderful work keep it up...:)
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  • From Firiel11 on July 11, 2005
    I wanted you to know that I have thoroughly enjoyed your story, from beginning to end. I especially liked the way you characterized Saitoh, and as a History major, the royalty tidbits you added at the end of each chapter. Since I am a newbie at AFF.net, I would very much appreciate it if you would email me the next time you update, and let me know if there's a list to join or something. Thanx!

    Once again, great story--keep it up!

    ~Firiel11
    elfsage@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - Kallipygia on May 09, 2005
    Hi, Fireminx! As always, I enjoyed reading the newest chapter of this fic. Poor Tokio, having to suffer through this! I thought Megumi's reaction to the whole affair was very well done, and Saitou's increasing compassion for Tokio, expressed in the only ways he can allow himself, are very touching. Keep up the good work! :)
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  • From ANON - Lyss on May 08, 2005
    Having no constructive comments to offer--only boundless praise--I've never written a review before. But when chapter 16 nearly made me cry, I knew I needed to at least say something. Thank you for this intelligent, well written story that I believe stays very faithful to one of my all time favorite characters. Keep up the amazing work. Thank you again.
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  • From ANON - Kallipygia on May 05, 2005
    Hi, Fireminx! Just wanted to say I'm still enjoying this story tons; thanks for updating! *does happy dance* I've love the turn you've taken with Tokio's power (i.e. her being a channel), and the developing relationship between Tokio and Saitou. I also appreciate the little relevant historical notes at the end of each chapter; please keep doing that!

    You do a great job of keeping the romantic/erotic tension going, and I love your lemons. I don't know how tightly plotted this story is or if you've got any room to take suggestions, but I'd love to see a lemon between Tokio and Saitou with a willing Tokio who's had the "birds-and-bees" talk that was missing from her previous education. :)
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  • From ANON - Zerianyu on May 05, 2005
    Hey

    EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Loud squeal of excitment) You updated hurahh hurahh. I love this fic I do hope you post soon, but whneever life gives yo ua chance ughhhhhhhhhh I hate sour milk products...............umm asnyway sorry. I am still thorally confused and can't not wait until you updated. I need to updated fics...........hmmmmmm m ybrain dosn't ahev any ideas though ughhhh I need to go lie down wahhhhh sister for taking her laptop lol. I hope all gets better for you. Love it eeeeeeee you updated hurah.
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  • From ANON - steelphoenix on April 15, 2005
    Wow... I can't wait for you to end the cliffhanger! What is a channel? What is Tokio's power? What will Saitou do about it? I'm on edge here! PLEASE UPDATE!
    This story is really well-written! It just drew me in, and I couldn't stop reading... I just had to see what happened next. You've got the characters of Saitou and Tokio really well, and made them really interesting - giving them real 'character'! I love it... and I love them. Please keep writing, this is great... except for the cliffhangers!
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  • From ANON - mel on March 03, 2005
    Dammit! it was getting soooo good! keep going, it's an order!
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  • From ANON - Senaca on February 26, 2005
    Wow. That was some very well written and interesting chapters. Also, the facts at the bottom of each chapter provides a different point of view on some of history's figures. I like it. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Ellie on February 21, 2005
    i love this story...i kinda find it gross that saito is like 30 something years old, but its all good. great job...write more
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  • From ANON - kallipygia on February 14, 2005
    YAY, the chapter we've all been waiting for!!!!! *doingnakedcartwheels* Thanks for updating! I'm looking forward to learning how Tokio's ability to serve as a channel is going to manifest, how it's going to help Saitou, and I can hardly wait to see the Council's reaction to their new relationship. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Kenta Divina on February 14, 2005
    Presently I'm taking a British Studies course in England and now everything I've been reading in your footnotes makes compleate sense. This story is definitly one of the best I have ever come across - from fanfic.net, to personal webpages. Wonderful characterizations, plots, descriptions... everything! I'm a bit miffed that you left us in a cliffy like that, but I suppose you are entitled as the author. Terrific!
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  • From ANON - sonia on February 13, 2005
    oh god!!! why the hell did you stop there? urg it was goin so well. damn. ok now the question. Whats a channel? plz update as soon as possible. i hardly get to read a good Saitokio fic. :).
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  • From ANON - dai_nemesis on February 02, 2005
    I just wanted to say this is the best Saitou -Tokio fic ever! I thought you had given up on the story and was very disappointed but now... I'M REALLY HAPPY! I'm looking forward to reading the next chapters.
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  • From ANON - Zerianyu on February 02, 2005
    Hey

    AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! I love this fic, is Saitou stil going to explain what the birds and the bees are to her????????? I so wish he would that would be sooooo funny, but then again I know this isn't a comedy and what not, but a little humor wouldn't hurt would it?????? Y ouahve some humor in it and what not. I love the way the fic is and if you totally skipped that I'd be awwwww poooo, but it wouldn't hurt the story one bit ahhhhhh I love this fic and I just LOVE ITTTTTTTTTTTTTTT.


    I didn't mean your fic was too serioyus I just menat humor doesn't hur even in a serious fic in general, ackkk that sounds the same huh???? Sorry I LOVE IT.)
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