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Reviews for The Demon Within

By : SelenityJade
  • From twistidcandi on April 08, 2007
    I really like the direction of this story. Im a huge fan of K/M pairings. I just can't find enough good stories with the two. Keep up the excelent work!
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  • From Tenshiaka on February 09, 2007
    Oooh! More! You must write more! I do like how you characterized all of them though. Very good job!
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  • From ANON - Mag on March 14, 2006
    This is a great start! I really love this pairing. You could use a beta for a few awkward sentances but all in all I like your writing style and I am looking forward to more.
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  • From on October 10, 2005
    i love it please update soon.
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  • From ANON - laura on September 27, 2005
    Yes! Another Merryl x Knives, they are so rare outa there.... I love her bitchiness and his sadism; I hope you will update soon. milly's pregnancy is a Good idea, can't wait to see knives with the baby.
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  • From ANON - Maria on September 19, 2005
    This has a really promising beginning! I love the way you so deftly set up the scene... and I'm sure Knives' telepathy will lead to a very interesting new twist on the ol' Knives/Meryl scenes. Love it!
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  • From ANON - genuinelies on September 14, 2005
    Good start - I'm really enjoying your characterizations! Update is coming soon, yes?
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  • From ANON - Lady D on July 06, 2005
    Oh thank you for making some Meryl/Knives! And that it even has plot. . . . well, I'm just tickled pink.

    Hope you keep going with it, it's delightful.
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  • From ANON - a on July 03, 2005
    sweet
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  • From ANON - Obsessive on June 21, 2005
    Wow this is really a great fanfic, please update it soon.
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  • From ANON - Shiroi Hikari on June 10, 2005
    Great story! Lol, I think Knives is going to become VERY afraid of Meryl when she's in a bad mood...^_^ Please continue soon!
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on March 31, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - ObsessedFan on January 22, 2005
    AHhhh it was great please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - LadyKarura on November 26, 2004
    *Draws her katana* You better finish this quickly, I absolutely love Knives and Meryl as a couple, they're so compatible, and there aren't enough fics out there to keep me entertained. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, hopefully soon *katana shines in the darkness*
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  • From ANON - nutmeg on September 03, 2004
    This was great, please write more soon.
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