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Reviews for In Times of War

By : KitoSan
  • From Dreamfool on December 13, 2007
    Oh my God this is a great story. Why did you give up on it.
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  • From ANON - Vee on August 04, 2006
    Very good story. I quite like the plot. HOwever, I find the bits of Japanese kind of distracting, since this story seems to have nothing to do with Japan... Am I right? But otherwise, I think this story definitely has potential.
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  • From ANON - reyn on July 20, 2004
    wow. its really good so far! i can't wait to see how this story turns out! update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Ryoan on June 17, 2004
    You've got an interesting story going here. I'll be looking forward to reading more of it.
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  • From ANON - Ryoan on June 17, 2004
    Ok, great so far. Then only thing I had trouble with is the very ending. I just couldn't visualize the concept right. nex next chapter micleaclear it up though. But I think that you are on a good track for a great story. As you know, I read to read fanfiction... so I can get along with various versions of characters. I love to read what the imaginations are of someone else.

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  • From ANON - Ryoan on June 17, 2004
    Hey, Kit. Sorry that I'm just getting to your story. I know that you have three chapters up, but this review is for the first one. I think that you really did an excellent job with pointing out who's who and who's what. I like that you nicknamed Dee 'the black wolf'. I can definitely see some guessing of motives on Dee'st wit with Berkley once Ryo shows up. I think the write-ups save a lot of 'other' writing in the story itself. You've already set them up and if there's any question of who's who again, you can always return to chap. 1 and refresh. I think that you're going to do a great job as a serious writer and you have a good start of an idea. Your other story 'Fallen' was a great one too, that I enjoyed very much, so I don't doubt you can't write serious on this new one. I don't know any of the answers to the questions you asked right off the top of my head, but if I find anything I'll send it to you.... Look forward to reading 2 and 3 to see what you're doing with this.
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  • From isukichan on June 15, 2004
    please!!! Update soon!!!! Wanna have more of this story!!! I really like it ^o^
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  • From ANON - Kito_San Yang on June 14, 2004
    IN RESPONSE TO MOFAF:

    Arigatou!
    I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my fanfiction. I didn't actually thinyoneyone would read it but hey, there's a first for everything! Well, put your fears to rest, take a deep breath, and dive into your imagination. You might find the answers you seek! *^-^*
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  • From ANON - MOFAF on June 13, 2004
    excellent beginning, I can't wait to see what happens next.

    poor Diana...hope some way she and Rose are able to get together

    would love to see Bikki and Carol get together too...some how.
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