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Reviews for A Little Too Late

By : pinkwhirlwind
  • From zetsuai2005 on January 15, 2007
    A gripping tale. I liked your characterizations of Youji and Aya. In an impossibly surreal, death-oriented 'life', Youji chooses life by choosing Aya, and Aya chooses life by choosing Youji. 'Get together' stories about this couple seldom have the meat to them that this one does, and I felt good about the ending, (and good about life and myself), but you have a seed for continuing the story if you choose. Maybe a story about these two living a 'normal' life in Seattle would be boring to some, but I would welcome it as a breath of fresh air. I like your writing style and gravity of purpose, but most of all I like and respect your insight into the 'anima' of this couple. Thanks for sharing your vision with me.
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  • From ANON - red pheonix on June 29, 2004
    wow. just wow.
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  • From ANON - Talyssa on June 27, 2004
    Oh no! I was getting all into it and then you leave me at this horrible cliffhangery cliffhanger.
    so mean. T_T I've read a few of your story snippits here and there (do you ever finish them????) but this so far is one of your better ones I think. Not that the others are bad or anything but this really caught me up. More!
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  • From ANON - Cole\'sLover on June 26, 2004
    This is good. I'm a huge fan of the Weiss boys (just want to hug & squeeze them cause they are so cute/sexy). This fanfic has a bit of a twist to it by adding "Daniel", very interesting. You've caught my attention. You keep writing and I'll keep reading. PLEASE post the next chapter soon. ^ _ ^
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  • From ANON - Chantal Marchon on June 17, 2004
    Oh, I like this. Yohji's personality is so interesting. The brutal honesty mixed with a sarcastic caustic edge aimed completely at himself. I also like the analogy that you used. Very nice stuff. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Lili on June 17, 2004
    okay. now... continue! now! ..nnnow! now? .... CONTINUE ARGH
    seriously, your writing is amazing! I'm keeping diligent watch for more
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