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Reviews for Ryouga\'s Surprise

By : LadyFlame
  • From ANON - Gennie on January 19, 2005
    I love this story and have stood by it faithfully but where is the next chapter??
    I've been waiting and waiting but no chapter. Please write another chapter before my next birthday which is in 3 months. Please???
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  • From ANON - lemon edgsdhsdfy on January 17, 2005
    i love it...
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  • From oldwolf on December 23, 2004
    All told pretty good, I look forward to the update. Though I will say that you might want to go back through this chap and do some serious corrections, the DB error with AFF caused some problems with the read.
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  • From ANON - Alexis on December 15, 2004
    Having the chance to read the first version of the text, I have to say it keeps the best things, the humor, the sexuality(The nice and tender encounter), the sensuality (Akane's Upksirt), and in general Ranma's atmosphere.
    I would like it to be longer, or have at least another set for them, maybe a change of posture, but we have to remember it's the first chapter.
    An interesting add on would be a scene with Ranmachan after this one, I hope that will take place in chapter 2 (bathroom??)
    Nifty story, keep up the good work, and stay put!! since I know you can do better.


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  • From ANON - Bishie on December 10, 2004
    HOT!!!

    long live hentai/ lemon lovers!

    ecspecially when they get ecspecially good lemons to read
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  • From ANON - kp on November 18, 2004
    Please update, I really like what you have so far and I want to know what comes next. Please. (:
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 04, 2004
    do you have to include ryoga? It's good as is
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 17, 2004
    This is a really great fic, good job!
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  • From ANON - Zero1 on September 18, 2004
    awesome chapter.. please please please continue the story. Man, can't wait to see Ryouga's reaction to "innocent akane" and Ranma doing what they do.
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  • From on September 16, 2004
    W00t! Nice one! Cant wait until i can read the next chapter. I can only hope its as great as this. Nice details!
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  • From ANON - Gennie07 on September 10, 2004
    THat was the sweetest story I have ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ohmigod!!!!!!!!! If you do n ot write the next chapter I will so get the bunnies on you!!!!!! I think you know the bunni..........


    Peace
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  • From ANON - Ryuujin on September 04, 2004
    Please please please keep on writing!! Its a good story, with the proper amount of humour!

    Loved it!!
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  • From ANON - Bill Ponder on August 24, 2004
    By all means, do continue! The lemon was good but you need to work in more of the zany maddness that RAMNA 1/2 is noted for!
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  • From Stardreamer on August 20, 2004
    Absolutely fantastic! I can't wait to see what Ryouga's reaction is going to be, please please continue!
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  • From ANON - missyspikehead on August 18, 2004
    ohhh!!! you must keep writing! must must must!!! is very yummy yummy no? lol i like this sch ich i'm gonna add it to my favorites list, an honor reserved for only the very best mind you. i bow down at your brilliance,

    jem (missyspikehead)
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