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Reviews for The Game

By : Mychan
  • From ANON - rAiNwAtEr on July 08, 2005
    This story is interesting to say the least. I am glad you decided to make this story more than a one shot. I really like the pairing! My only comment is that maybe you should make Ryoma more presistent. If anything Ryoma would be the one to mess Fuji's game up. I would love for Fuji to get pissed off when his little toy escapes his deadly web! Oh the drama LOL. Maybe Ryoma can piss Fuji off even more by playing his own game on another team mate. Well keep up the good work and if it is not to much trouble could you send me an e-mail when you update this interesting story?

    Whishing you the best of luck,

    rAiNwAtEr
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  • From ANON - sethdrix on May 22, 2005
    SEX-XAY!!!
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  • From ANON - Zhang on March 03, 2005
    This is by far one of my fav PoT fanfic of smutness. I love TezuRyo but the I do actually like the idea of Tezu/Fujii/Ryo threesome. I hope Ryoma will getting back at them in the next chapter soon...great piece of writing. I really love it. ^__^ "5 stars for you"
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  • From ANON - SirenofHell on February 08, 2005
    OMG
    This is brilliant! YOu have to update soon! Pleeeeeeeeeease!

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  • From ANON - Aura on January 15, 2005
    Oh my, that is just so delightfully pleasureable stuff to read. With your skills in writing, the hotness is delivered right down to the reader. Please write some more, Kaidoh/Ryoma/Momo would be greatly appreciated ///_~
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  • From ANON - My-chan on January 09, 2005
    @Shinigami Yumi
    I think I stated somewhere that it was just meant to be a PWP which developed kinda into a pwp series XD So... no actual "story" intended.. that means you're perfectly right :P

    @every one else

    thank you for your reviews :)

    and I'll try to make Fuji's intentions yet a bit clearer as it comes along. Hopefully I'll manage so it'll answer some questions :)
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  • From ANON - Eci_Frog on December 28, 2004
    *drool* I think this is one of the most sexiest stories i have ever read. *runs of to take a cold shower*
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  • From ANON - Shinigami Yumi on December 28, 2004
    Um... Great as far as PWPs go... Kinda failing to see a story behind the smut. ^_^ Um, great smut though. Keep the good sm... story up. ^_^;;
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  • From ANON - Animaniama on December 19, 2004
    Do they really love Ryoma or just trying to play with him. What will be left of Ryoma if they had finish playing with the game?
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  • From ANON - May on December 15, 2004
    Wow, more...more... UPDATE SOON NE! I WANNA KNOW WHAT WILL RYOMA DO TO PAY THOSE TWO BACK! WHO'LL BE THE WINNER OF THIS GAME?

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  • From ANON - Yami Kage on November 08, 2004
    No offense, really, but My-chan and Piro-san.can bthe two of you please act your age, or at least stop fighting like 3 year olds. If Piro-san thinks that the story is senseless, then don't read it. If you're trying to correct My-chan, could you at least do it more nicely. I do believe she has put a lot of effort into this fanfic. Sides,how many PWP on this site makes sense, a horse fucking a human, make sense? Not much, so please ,accept things here with an open mind,if you wanna correct her or point it out to her, do it more politely, no one likes poeple giving them none-helpful critisim. Fighting over this topic with Piro is really stupid, it just means you're furious which is what he wants you to be. Just ignor him, what damage can he do with his keyboard?(besides hitting you that is,but your not within touch.)

    Anyways, nice story, I've been trying so hard to find one with Ryoma,Fuji and Tezuka in it.
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  • From ANON - My-chan on October 29, 2004
    *tropf* das hat nichts mit Zickenterror zu tun, sondern allein damit, dass es mir bei dem Teil hier allein um den Spaß ging, und ich nicht finde, dass alles 100% Sinn machen muss ^^;; dann würde nämlich das ganze Konzept nicht mehr fuonieonieren. Und nein, ich hab nichts gegen Kritik, ich fand dein Einwand nur irgendwie Unsinnig, denn wie gesagt, es ist nur ein PWP und das ding soll Spaß machen, und sonst nichts.

    Aber wenn du den Einwand mit der Realität schon bringst... hast du's denn schon ausprobiert? Ich meine, wir können alle nur über das schreiben was wir uns vorstellen, es sei denn wir ham persönliche Erfahrung, ergo "es schon mal gemacht".

    Ich geb ja zu, dass "The Game" die Realität an manchen Stellen sicher vermisst, aber ich war auch nicht drauf aus ein authentisches Stück Fanfiction zu schreiben als ich damit angefangen hab. Daher sind so Mankos drin, geb ich ja offen zu. Hab ich auch nie abgestritten. Aber ich finds irgendwie unsinnig auf so Kleinigkeiten rumzureiten.

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  • From ANON - Piro on October 27, 2004
    *lol*

    Dearest, even a PWP has to make sense! And well... For being undhe she shower while fucking: Did they use enemas to make their asses wet inside?!
    It's solely about the fucking. But even if it is, try to stick to *reality* at least!


    I'm not interested in you spamming my email box. That's why.

    Did I hit a nerve or something?

    Ah, aber wart' ma... Du bist typisch deutsch. Ich merk das schon. Zickenterror, sobald man nur ma' echte Kritik anbringt. Hehe.
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  • From ANON - My-chan on October 24, 2004
    nownow, very clever not leaving your email so that I cannot answer you.

    Whoever said, that Ryoma was NOT allowed t to to the toilet? In the first chapter I never said that he had to lie there unmoving for two days, now did I? You better read more carefully next time, or keep your thoughts to yourself. And like the warning said, this is PWP, it's supposed to be NOT thought through. get the hint?

    it doesn't matter if it makes sence in real life, since it's fanFICTION, and it's all about sex sex which you said yourself was good. So what's your problem? This is not supposed to be a well thoughtout story. it's PWP. nothing else. It's about hot guys having hot sex. and it doesn't matter if it makes sense or not.

    and how are their fingers dry when they're under the shower?

    next time: think, then type. thanks.
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  • From ANON - Piro on October 24, 2004
    Ehm... sorry... But have you ever tried to use shower gel as lubrication?! Well, I dare say, have fun going to the toilet the next few days, Ochibi-chan!
    Besides no one, absolutely NO one would endure it to be lay there for two days, without being able to move and *not* getting mad or freaking out! As nice and soft the captive gets treated!

    And you know... there are those things you have to do every day. Like going to the toilet. When, my dear, when did Ryoma get the chance in those two days, to go to the toilet?!

    This is a cheesy not thought through little piece of ficlet.
    The only thing that was okay was the sex. But as it seems you have no clue about male/male sex. Using shower gel is one of the most stupid ideas yaoi fic writers ever came up with!

    I mean, just put some shower gel on your dry hands or fingers and move them together for a while. You'll see what I mean!
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