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Reviews for Wake Me When Death Comes

By : animeyaoi
  • From barara on July 15, 2007
    Gah I loved "Portrait Without Sin"!!! In my opinion it's one of the best FAKE fics I've ever read in my life XD ANYWAYS! Lovely beginning of this fic, can't wait to see what happens next *love*
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  • From ANON - Shredded_Rose on March 21, 2005
    Ooooh, he better not die. I mean... this is a good start. It certainly suck syou right into the story, BUT HE BETTER NOT DIE! Ummm, yeah. If he dies, the kittens get it and all that... yep. Don't let him die. Pwease?
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  • From ANON - Lady Dragonphire on January 20, 2005
    Wow! Another great story from a fabulous author. I love your style of writing. You captured the emotions of the characters very well, especially all of Dee's grief and despair of losing Ryo. I hope you continue this very emotionally moving story. Keep up the awesome writing! I am looking forward to reading more. :)
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  • From ANON - PassionFire on October 10, 2004
    -wide eyed-
    Well after POS you have another fan but GEEZE! -wails-
    POOR DEE...No..POOR BIKKY!
    I mean really you're leaving Dee and Bikky together O.o' they willl kill each other by sundown >
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  • From ANON - Kranja on August 29, 2004
    Oh

    my

    god.

    You did NOT just do that. You couldn't REALLY have.... Aw, shit, I think I'm crying. Hm. Tears. Yep.
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  • From ANON - SatanSpinner67 on August 10, 2004
    OMFG!!!!!! *hugs you* I LOOOOOOOVE that story!!! I mean....I like.......cried...and stuff......OH GOD!!!! *sob* And the tilte was perfect, the writing was soooo personal! I can't grab that kind of angle for the life of me *bows to you* I am not worthy, but your story was so FRIGGIN' AWESOME!!!! *gasp* but that was only part one........MUST READ PART TWO...........*kisses your feet* Pwease, pwease, pwease, pwease, pwease, pwease, pwease, pwease, pwease, and more pweaseness, update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - PocketFox on July 15, 2004
    Holy crap. This is just... This is really intense! Normally I avoid deathfics like the plague, but I enjoyed Portrait Without Sin so much I thought I'd look into this one too. I'm on the edge of tears even after that first chapter, but I have a feeling I'll keep reading it to the end. You're a wonderful writer, Ryoan, one of my favorites. *hugs!*
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  • From ANON - Venus4 on July 08, 2004
    Ahhh, poor Ryo, looks around for more of the fic... ahhhhhh, no more posted yet ..... please add more soon ;-)
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  • From ANON - MiMi on July 05, 2004
    Oh, my gosh! I don't know if I should continue reading. I don't think my poor heart can take it. If this first chapter is any indication, the story is going to be more of an emotional roller coaster than "Portrait." Oh, I am going to be so heart-broken if anything really happened to Ryo. And poor Dee. How is he ever going to cope? Hell, how AM I ever going to cope?
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 04, 2004
    All I can say is "this is going to be a awesome story!" Your story kept me interested throughout it and details were just enough to tell that you can tell what is going on in this story.Now you just have to update so I will become happy. Cant wait!
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  • From ANON - AkaTsuki on July 04, 2004
    .........*sniffles*......okai well...WHAT TO SAY TO THAT...well it was definatley believable just look at how many ppl u got buying some tissues and its only the first ch!!! you did say there was some kind of twist to this...jus dont let dee die too!!! pwees!!! ill definatly read this story to the end (with some difficulty of course) so update asap

    ~Aka
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  • From ANON - wildefyre on July 04, 2004
    Oh God! You have me crying harder then I have ever cried for any story! Holy shit! The emotions in this were just so damn real that I almost wanted to scream at Ryo like Dee was! If I could write half as well as this, I'd be happy! Please continue this... Even though it's going to break my heart to read it... I will. Now I need to go get a new box of tissues and take my contacts out... Oh God! *Sobs harder* Awesome work!!
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  • From ANON - Devi on July 03, 2004
    Nice start. Very well-written.
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  • From ANON - Amethyst on July 03, 2004
    You truly have an art to knock people off their feet right from the beginning. And to be making poor Dee suffer again...! *Buckets of tears falling* I definitely don't have a clue where you are heading with this st.. I.. I mean, I'm sure that it's going to be filled with heartbreaking moments, but how this is going to all come out is the real question. Unless you really do leave us sobbing all the way through! God, I don't know if I can buy that many kleenxes.

    I think you did an excellent job with what you've written so far. Lots of intense emotions and action going on. Really loved the weight of meaning with the slence and slowness of everything. That split second of their hands nearly touching. The seriousness of Dee trying to take care of Ryo. His reaction of hearing the single tone of the monitor... It was all great! I do seriously grieve that you killed one of them, but I'm going to be sticking with the story anyway. You're fascinating with your ideas!
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  • From ANON - Analia on July 02, 2004
    *sniffs back tears* If I did love you so much, I would kill you for having Ryo die! But I could see Dee reacting that way to Ryo getting shot. Yeah, you are right on the money. I can't wait for you to update again. You are the best fanfiction writer I have come across in a long, long time. I'm not trying to flatter you either. You seriously are the BEST. Please updaoon,oon, now, lest I go insane from waiting.

    --
    Analia
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