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Reviews for A Fine Line

By : Kureno
  • From ANON - Meiun on October 11, 2004
    This was a beautiful story. I can't wait to see the update.

    ^.~ The lemons were VERY well written. I loved the under-the-table scene, especially. Yuki's sughtughty!

    Anyway, I could hardly see any spelling/grammar mistakes, and that's great. I hate to see any spelling mistakes right at the climax of a story (pun intended).

    Great job!
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  • From on September 26, 2004
    this story is really riveting! Kyo is being a little too dense for my decadence but thats ok. i hope it has a happy ending! T_T keep on posting!
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  • From ANON - bunnicle on September 26, 2004
    Oh, that's a nice story. i can't wait to see what you do with it. And please, write more soon! Soon!
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  • From ANON - Rene (pronounced Reen) on September 26, 2004
    *takes in a breath and rubs eyes* Okay....this is being honest here...
    *stretches* I've been up from 6amsat to *looks at clock* 1pm Sunday reading yaoi fanfics seeing if there was any that caught my interests...and lemme say that I usually read one shots but this one got me intrigued. Then after every chapeter I kept reading I dunno why the hell but tch' i did and I want mo.*sh.*shruggs* plain and simple brilliant work and hope to see the next chapter soon cause i know good and damn well you don't think this is the last chap do you? *smirks*
    Ja.
    Rene Kuraitora
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  • From ANON - kaesaku on September 26, 2004
    huwow~
    it's alive!!! :D
    i thought u took out the story already..
    i can't seem to find it in ff.net anymore..
    but it's here!
    and you uploaded!
    that's why im happy!!!
    hahahahaha.. ;p
    write soon! :D
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  • From ANON - iria on September 26, 2004
    pleeease continue, this story is so great!!!

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  • From ANON - neko#8 on September 26, 2004
    damn kyou and his conclusion! argh... poor poor yuki... nice love scene, but HEARTBREAKING ending for this chapter!!! WHY?!?!?!!? omg... kyou and yuki were... aww... update soon! hope they get back together...
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  • From ANON - Tanaskare on September 26, 2004
    You ARE incredible!
    That chapter was so good!
    I love the final, hope to see
    the rest of the story soon.

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  • From ANON - Polka dot on September 25, 2004
    rocky much, but that's the way ti should be between those two.
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  • From on August 31, 2004
    heyyy....i just wrote a new FF called "Akito's Demand" (i knoe gayest title ever) but i relle need ur help...somethin about it is off and i dont know what to do and i want you to help me b/c u r a frigen awesomme writer...and im still young and havent mastered writing techniques the way u have..so plzzz if u can, help me out a lil bit ok?? u can go read my story if u want and find stuff in it u think i need to change...ill glady take in any info u need to give me to help make my story better!! ~_^ much lovee...by the wayy..this story omfg amazingggg!!!!
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  • From ANON - weiss kittyn on August 05, 2004
    GYAHHH!!! you HAVE to update this soon~! what happens with Yuki and Kyo? Will they ever get together? Please tell you you're adding another chapter soon?! PLEASE?


    kittyn
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  • From ANON - JarredGoddess on July 23, 2004
    You've caught not only Kyo's personality almost to a 'T', but you've got the inner turmoil so perfectly that I can't even begin to use words to explain it. I'm quite impressed with the story...we ARE going to get more, RIGHT?
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  • From GhostHelwig on July 23, 2004
    Yeah, I'm an idiot for not realizing you'd already written more, but ah ... ... Anyway, I can't wait for the next update! I'd never realized that Trent Reznor wrote such beautiful lyrics before now - and every song you chose fit in really well... Wonderful writing, compelling story, and I eagerly await more! Rock on!
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  • From GhostHelwig on July 23, 2004
    I loved this story!!! I hope you do decide to add more to it, because I thought you had a great grasp of the characters, and it was a both meaningful and incredibly hot story! Plus, I am in love with all things silverchair, and the song fit perfectly with the story ane che characters. I especially liked how you used the words at the end, leaving off with 'I want you...' Beautiful. Just a really well done story. My compliments.
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  • From ANON - Chelle-chan on July 22, 2004
    Good stuff! Very well written! More! More! I demand more!! ^o^
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