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Reviews for Youji\'s Daughter

By : pinkwhirlwind
  • From ANON - chibi hentai on October 18, 2004
    oh, please update this really soon. this is so good! i love preggy fics and morbid fics and this goes right in there ^_~ please update soon. is it just me or is this leaning a bit more into Y/O then Y/A? hmm, well, i like that pairing to, or it could just be me thinking that. hehe.

    ja ne
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  • From ANON - ryushin on September 26, 2004
    *crying*
    It's going to be tragic, isn't it? Figures and makes more sense. But it's so sad!

    Glad you updated. I really like this story, beats me why but it's true.

    Later
    ryushin
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  • From ANON - tigermink on September 25, 2004
    This is one of the most believeable male pregnancy stories i have ever read. I think your doing a wonderful job with the characters
    and i hope you will continue. I look forward to the next chapters very much.
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  • From ANON - ryushin on July 22, 2004
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    "I deflowered Youji and he's carrying my baby. He's so beautiful with eyes of living emeralds and a belly with will swell with fertile love. My darling is withchild," End of Quote

    Is it just me or did you get carried away ju-ust a tiny little bit. Don't get me wrong I think it's hilarious. *rofl
    So it is actually Aya's, mh, seed so to speak only without the seed and more with the DNA and Asuka's womb and egg and Yohji is the carrier?
    So it's a threesome baby?! Poor Ken indeed - a softporn poet and a preg man that's what I call a holiday.

    read you
    ryushin


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  • From ANON - ryushin on July 16, 2004
    Mh. Tough one.
    Well written as usual, wouldn't expect less from you. However I have to admit this one squicks me. Asuka's womb and the whole operation - *gaaah!
    I will go on reading though, because I agree that it is great that you actually care to explain how mpreg is possible and the tender relationship between
    Ran and Yohji is heartbreakingly bifuliful.
    What I don't understand is, did Masafumi use Yohji's own sperm with one of Asuka's eggs? Yohji said he was already pregnant and Masafumi said to Asuka that
    that was what she once wanted for herself, so I think that is correct but why is that a present for Ran then?
    Oh well - I guess I will find out.

    Read you
    ryushin

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  • From ANON - Rhione on July 14, 2004
    This is a great start! I like how you kept Ran in character with everything. I also love how you explain how Yohji is giong to be able to hold a baby inside him. Many fic authors skip that concept completely while you delve into it. This is quite detailed and i would love to read more of this!



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