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Reviews for Business Trip

By : dbzfan
  • From master30 on June 24, 2011
    I love your story it was great. Keep up the great work. You are a great author.
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  • From Renaki0586 on August 30, 2009
    mmm, that was so hot! You've GOT TO make a sequel for this story! ;-)
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  • From Skull on October 19, 2007
    Uhhhhhhhhhhhhh Are you an ameture or something because this is not the right format please look over other people's work and get a descent look at what you should right but you're probably sayin I'm one to talk well ha just if you gonna make another please fix it alot

    Skull J. Darkmaster "The most preverted guy in Lucifer's opinion" Is out
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  • From azurarose on June 01, 2007
    Not bad, although it was a little difficult to read at times. If I may suggest you put each new speaker on a nwe line. It would make things so much easier.

    Otherwise it looked good.
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  • From SoubiTheBlueButterfly on December 17, 2006
    LOL OMFG THEY USED KARROTS??? ROFFFFFLLL THIS IS SO FUNNY I HAVE NEVER READ A YURI LEMON BEFORE BUT JUST IMAGINING SOMETHING LIKE THAT IN AN INNOCENT ANIME IS HALARIOUS!!!!!!!!!!! OH, GOD I CAN'T FEEL MY RIB CAGE!!XD
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  • From ANON - CrazyIvan(notloggedin) on November 15, 2006
    BACK YOU FOUL BEASTS! BACK I SAY! **smacked on of the flesh eating pandas with a iron rod**
    Damn those pandas, they're after me for messing around in the bamboo cage. Anyways, nice story here, pretty well written for your first one, a tad bit short, but nothing to bad. I look forward if you're making a sequal, very very interesting. Just, try not to use the hampsters in any sexual way, it's just un sanitary. : Ivan out....
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  • From ANON - ruleroftravels on October 21, 2006
    Great, great story! Loved it =^^=
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  • From JdWheels on December 18, 2005
    Please do a sequel, I must see more. That was well written.

    Check mine out on here... you might get a kick out of my depraved mind.

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  • From ANON - Magicalbunny on September 28, 2005
    please write more it was so good i need more
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  • From ANON - The Tap Dancing Otter on January 17, 2005
    ha ha ha, a hamtaro fanfic. A pretty good one too.
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