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Reviews for Setsuna's First Orgasm

By : CarrieAnn
  • From ANON - Raven on September 05, 2005
    your fic wasn't bad, it could have been a little more detailed, but other than that it was fine. and good job!
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  • From ANON - Kikyo Sagara on March 22, 2005
    Honestly?.. It was bad.

    1. Setsuna has black hair with just a green tint to it. Like Raye has black haoir with a purple tint to it.
    2. It dosent seem real
    3. Setsuna has done so before.
    4. Not enough detail and way to short.
    5. Every good story has a plot, sayoing yours dosent just proves its bad.
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  • From ANON - Lili on October 11, 2004
    this is the best, i've ever read.Keep it up
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  • From ANON - me on September 18, 2004
    A good idea, but you need to focus more on when she cums. That was a little weak.
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  • From on August 28, 2004
    well...this is good...considering tht it is her first time...she knows how to hit her gspot........anyway...it is good....
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  • From ANON - neobabyluna on August 18, 2004
    i have an account on here, so don't think i'm annonymus... but yeah. it was cool. it could have been a bit longer, but it was cool.
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