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Reviews for Bath Time Blues

By : melfina
  • From ANON - crystal on October 11, 2004
    Nice lemon! I didn't notice this nice little addition to bath time bless, if you don't mind may i archive this one too at viva la kyouke?

    Get back to me soon! Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - riversprite77 on August 20, 2004
    I'm glad you posted the other one first, make it seem kind of like a mini-series!! Cannot wait for the threesome!
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  • From ANON - Muse-chan on August 19, 2004
    LOL. This was really good, but there was one point that sort of took me out of it. Generally, the climax of sexual intercourse is an 'orgasm'. An 'organism' is a living being. You might wanna change that.

    Otherwise, though, this was really good. I was so happy that Kyou was on top. It drives me nuts that just about everyone makes him a whimpering little uke boy! ^_^ Thank you so much for this wonderful bit of smut!
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  • From ANON - snowfall on August 19, 2004
    Excellent! I don't normally care for pwp, but you did an excellent job of making it sound somewhat romantic. And, to top it off, I like your style. I look forward to reading more of your stories. The stories I normally read in the Inuyasha category haven't been updated and I thought I'd come over here looking for some yaoi. Thanks for an enjoyable hot read.
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