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Reviews for Home Alone

By : preternatural
  • From ANON - Ile on December 11, 2005
    that was hott... i'm at a loss for words .. really.. i noticed a few spelling errors that took me awhile to figure out what the word was.. but i got it in the end.. i liked it very much and i hope to see more of your writing soon ^.^
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  • From ANON - Luna on November 13, 2005
    nice. I have a challenge if your willing can u do a smut ona were Ayame and Ritsu are a couple and they have sex and then shigure walks in and joins in. Plz and thank u

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  • From ANON - Luna on November 13, 2005
    nice. I have a challenge if your willing can u do a smut ona were Ayame and Ritsu are a couple and they have sex and then shigure walks in and joins in. Plz and thank u

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  • From ANON - Luna on November 13, 2005
    nice. I have a challenge if your willing can u do a smut ona were Ayame and Ritsu are a couple and they have sex and then shigure walks in and joins in. Plz and thank u

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  • From ANON - lstdpnthght on October 29, 2005
    XO That was good... *is inspired to write more PWP goodness*
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  • From ANON - kyoslover on October 26, 2005
    SEX-AY! I love the Hatori/Shigure pairing....yummy! Maybe you could write a sequel all about the improper use of a new dining room table that Shigure decides to buy...eh? eh? teehee! anyways great story! I'm gonna *rec* it!
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  • From ANON - Kat on October 25, 2005
    WOW.....I liked it!!! for someone who doesn't write yaoi very much you are very decent!!! :)
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  • From ANON - person on October 23, 2005
    Awesome. *evil grin* Damn cool. That was majorly kick ass. Good work!
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  • From ANON - sorekai on October 21, 2005
    i love this but if you ever write a shigure/hatori could you make hatori the uke.
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  • From ANON - coneko-neko on September 02, 2005
    OMG!! that was reallly HOT!! awsome job and great fic.
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  • From ANON - Hanyou_Kagome on November 10, 2004
    I like it ^^ I've read it like 4 times and I still love it!
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  • From preternatural on August 27, 2004
    Reply to Babyfabgs:

    Kyou... >.
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  • From preternatural on August 27, 2004
    Reply to Briar: (briar@discount-muse.com)

    First and foremost, thank you for taking the time to read my story :)

    Second, thanks for reviewing the story! And it was a rather detailed one too, and that is always the kind of feedback a writer wants to improve his or her craft.

    Hn... the yukatta thing, yes, I believe your observation is right. I was kind of placing this story somewhat between the seasons (i.e. the change of weather between Winter and Spring). But I guess the weather is still not warm enough for that kind of clothing. Thanks for pointing that out! I think I'll try and swing it so the outfit fits even in that kind of weather (heh, I'll think of something ^_~).

    I'm glad you enjoyed my first foray into the yaoi fandom.

    Thanks again! And long live yaoi XD
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  • From on August 27, 2004
    HATORI-SENSEI!!! *major glompage ensues*

    Ahem.

    Loved the POV. Loved the sexved ved the flow of the story.

    You should write more lemyeahyeah? XD

    ---Kyou

    I mean...er..FayeFaye
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  • From ANON - Briar on August 25, 2004
    Before I start on the praise, I'll offer one tiny, nitpicky thing I noticed. Hatori thinks about how Akito is always sick in the winter, which makes me think this takes place in the winter. If it does, it's unlikely that Shigure would be wearing a yukata, even inside. A regular kimono, yes, but a yukata is a lighter version generally worn in summer. For me at least, when I hear yukata I think of warmer weather than the typical winter.


    Otherwise... Wow! You seriously have the characterization down pat. I could hear the voices as I read the story, and everything fit perfectly. For your first time writing yaoi, your sex scene was excellent. Very hot, and all the detail was great. Shigure always seems to know what everyone needs, and in this case I'm sure he was happy to give it up. This is a sweet, sexy story that I thouroughly enjoyed. Fabulous.
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