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Reviews for Concubine Chronicles

By : bsmartfanfic
  • From thebigW on February 13, 2005
    May a thousand blessings shower down upon you from the heavens, my friend, for:

    1) Showcasing Mihoshi's other emotional and psychological dimensions, making her into the complete person we all know she is.
    2) Having her step up and claim her prize... first!
    3) Not having Ryoko kill her for it.
    4) Ryoko taking him almost in a vengeful fashion, and making him beg... that sounds about right.
    5) I'm also thanking you in advance for making Ayeka the sluttiest of them all, the whore unleashed, once she gets 'broken in' (Pleeeeeeeeze!).

    Please consider, however, that now that the 'seal' is broken, someone's grades will take a downward spike (time to study? riiight....), and the fields will never again yield another carrot crop.

    Oh well, it's not like Ryo Ohki can't borrow power from one of Ryoko's gems, right?

    And... What about Sasami??? She's too smart not to figure things out sooner or later.

    'Why's everyone got a ravenous appetite all of a sudden? And instead of fighting, they've got this stupid grin on their face... all the time...'

    Muy caliente y muy exelente!

    W.
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  • From ANON - bookeater on February 13, 2005
    Really good chapter. You are one of the best author I have ever read. And I check evry week in hope that you update and it's sad that you dont do it more often because its rely good. One of the best story about Tenshi Muyo. Please continue Your storie.
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  • From ANON - Bo on February 09, 2005
    Great story with wonderfull foreplay detail I love how you made all the girls float both ways . Why haven't u updated reccently I'd really look forward For you lemon chapters about the girls and tenchi Update asap Please please update email me when you do or if you need any ideas
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  • From ANON - firelord on December 31, 2004
    this is a fantastic fanfiction i do hope that you post mor of this story soon.
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  • From ANON - firelord on December 13, 2004
    great story cant whait for you to continue
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 18, 2004
    It's one of the best fanfics i've ever read, but it stops right when it starts getting really good...
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  • From ANON - LaddyBoy on November 17, 2004
    Please Please Update!!! This is such a good story!!! I'll leave some room so that you have time to update...............................................................................................have u started yet?.....................................................................keep going you can do it!....................................................................finished? good now all you have to do is upload is right? I'll be waiting :)
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  • From ANON - rilly on November 01, 2004
    Quick when's the next chapter coming!!! I can't wait!!!
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  • From ANON - Talerce on October 27, 2004
    Dammit Man, write more! Please! This is one of the most compelling, erotic lemons I have read! I want, I NEED a wriggling mass of women and Tenchi!
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  • From thebigW on October 23, 2004
    Well, we should have known Washu would take things into her own hands, getting right to the heart of the matter. Somebody'd better explain to Sasami that she's gonna be hearing things and possibly seeing things and it could get steamy.
    Mihoshi is SO sexual in an innocent, "I didn't know I had that effect on you" kind of way, of course everybody wants her.
    This is great.
    Poor Tenchi, or should I say, lucky Tenchi...

    W.
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  • From ANON - LoganSaj on October 21, 2004
    Grr... Write... Faster!

    I like your story so far...
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  • From ANON - JockoMegane on October 21, 2004

    As you probably already know (and I have stated elsewhere) chapter 6 cannot come soon enough. Whenever it's ready; we're ready. :)
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  • From on December 05, 2004
    Man will you lose the self depreciating headers? I read your work and it is absolutly incredable. every last bit of it. You are one of the best fan fiction writers I have ever run into and beleave me I have read damn near everything on this site and media miner. You are one of the best so please act it.
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  • From ANON - J-Dog on October 09, 2004
    I LOVE IT!!!Its Funny and HOT!!!Update SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Albus the great on September 26, 2004
    I think it is an interesting start, usually when it comes to Tenchi fics and especially yuri fic in this particular fandom always has Tenchi being a mean sob and the woman decide that they have to release all that sexual tension so they use it on themseleves but your always showing how these relationships affect everybody in the household. Good Start.
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