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  • From ANON - Lu-chan on September 18, 2004
    I'm loving the story. Please Update , ve, very impatient. ^_^;
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  • From ANON - recurring somnambulist on September 17, 2004
    I don't think I reviewed the last chapter (5) but I did read it the same night I devoured Wild Flower. I was a little trigger-happy, but it was 3 in the morning when I finished, and that's three hours before I have to get up for my morning class.
    I had some liing ing feeling this afternoon that you might have updated, and, lo, I was right! I love this chapter because it was purely Sakura's perspective, and it was easier to just settle into the story and let it carry me away. I missed Touya though; am I wrong for loving his desperation? I also knew--just knew--that it would be Li to snatch her away from the auction. I squeaked a little "yay" out loud at that.
    Happy to know that there will be you-know-who soon. Everyone's favorite cousin.

    Awesome job on the ending line, by the way. I didn't see it coming. And that does not happen often.

    And someday you'll know
    that nature is so.
    The same rain that draws you near me
    falls on rivers and land
    on forest and sand
    makes the beautiful world that you see in the morning.
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  • From ANON - lili on September 17, 2004
    Cliffhanger. No...

    This story has gotten me thinking, though. I feel like Yukito is going to be added to the story but I don't know where, and it's driving me cratzie.

    But I just came back from a shopping excursion and then had a bruschetta splurging experience, so this story pretty much boosted today's fun scale to euphoric. :D

    Please continue soon! ^___^


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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on September 17, 2004
    YUE?!?!?! Okay, I was hlaf right, anyway... Syaoran is the one who bought her, just no the one who actually *owns* her; subtle difference. I imagine that pretty much the whole of the next chapter will be Toya getting to Terriene and learning he's a little bit too late? Should be...pleasant... Well, update soon, or whenever you have chapter 7 ready, whichever works for you.
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  • From ANON - Shantelle on September 17, 2004
    Please do not abandon this story I like it very much. It's very original and I can't wait to read more. Hope this incourages you a little i'm not very good with reviews. I bow down to the fantastic writer that you are...Master(lol!) Aurevoir!
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  • From ANON - Angel of Death on September 17, 2004
    I love this story. Really well done. And Yue's gonna be in it! Yay, gotta love hunky Yue ^.^ Is this gonna be a Sakura/Li or a Sakura/Yue? I mean in the end that is, cause i'm sure Sakura will be taken advantage of by pratically every male character in the story lol
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  • From ANON - Yen_Lily on September 17, 2004
    PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Scoprinac on September 14, 2004
    Okay, my prediction - either A.) Touya will arrive in time to "steal" Sakura away from the slave market before she's put on the block for sale, possibly with help from a conscience-driven Tomoyo, or B.) she will be sold to...(Drumroll please.) Syaoran Li!! What can I say, it's sort of obvious, I mean, how else you gonna get him into this story? Okay, Critiquing....all things considered, very well done, great narative flow, your writing style is quite superb, and I eagerly await the next chapter! See ya!
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  • From ANON - Yen_Lily on September 11, 2004
    PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I love this story!!! Very detali and lots of emotions. VERY strong details!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!
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  • From ANON - lili on September 10, 2004
    I really enjoy this fic--the characterization is practically perfect, and the plot isn't contrived at all. The way Sakura is expressed is something to be complimented many times over in itself, and I liked how single-minded and determined Touya is about his sister, although when he's around her he doesn't show it! That was very well done.

    All in all, the style was awesome and the flow was croon-worthy. Query, though: will there be any het in the fic? I keep imagining that if Sakura does get sold (because Touya can't find her before then, which seems kind of definite at this point), she'll end up with Syaoran and...things will happen. *evil eye*

    Kudos on the story! Update soon! :D
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  • From ANON - Angel on September 04, 2004
    that was cool. update soon.

    xoxoxoxo
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  • From ANON - your favorite sleepwalker on September 04, 2004
    Wow. Thanks for trusting me with all of this. I've read so many our sur stories and picked up on so many of your literary habits that I feel I know you; your stories are kind of a comfort in that sense. I feel as though I've been nudged to the back shelf of the library where nobody goes (except that you have over 300 hits on this story.)
    A little bit of constructive criticism, though: Your sex scenes are a liiiittle bit overtouched. Sort of exaggerated, I mean. In most scenarios with this story, I can't imagine that either character would have been so loud. But the descriptions were great, and the dialogue for the most part was really believable. Iovinoving the shoujo-ai coming out of you from a change--not that I don't appreciate your Touya/Yuki scenes. I go both ways, I guess (but I'm a closet Shoujo fan.)
    I'm assuming that if you bring Meiling into this story, it'll be as a really snappy semi-expert with a black collar. Or maybe she was already in the pen and I just didn't see it. Either way, hope she's floating around somewhere even if she doesn't get too much attention.
    Again, I love your sibling moments, especially the flashbacks of him sitting bedside and spoon-feeding her. I don't have any kind of a sibling relationship, and so they've always intrigued me; I like that it's such an important thing to you, and that you acknowledge in detail what most people don't give a second thought. It's not all sex to you; your characters have a past, they have memories, they're people.
    Another thing, you've been uncharacteristically detailed in this story. I remember you telling me you envied my descriptionst aft after reading this I have to say you have nothing to worry about. I like your more abrupt sentences, but it's also nice to see other sides to your talent.

    There were more specific lines I wanted to mention, but they got buried in my brain while I was reading. Sorry for the rambling.

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  • From ANON - razorqueen on September 03, 2004
    this story is exquisite. Please update soon. Im looking forward to it.
    well done
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