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Reviews for Kill You in the Morning

By : Shotakun
  • From ANON - Tendrilrake on February 23, 2005
    Damn that was well written! I especialy liked the very last line! *Snikker* To think Goku could have such a hentai mind... *Shurgs* oh well, makes for a great story!!!
    Eh hem, now if you'll excuse me *Walks off to the showers*
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  • From killerrattler on December 07, 2004
    WOW! Another Bloody Nose! Does Goku have any rope left, for the rest of us?
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  • From ANON - Cupnjava c[~]~~~*sip* on September 14, 2004
    Oh my goodness wasn’t that just delightful! It was sporadic, it was crazy it…bounced around and jostled the reader and yet it still had good flow.

    It was funny and yet erotic. That pillow is talk was kinda hot.

    Cute…real cute.

    You do need to correct the formatting. Converting to HTML can be difficult. I had a chapter do this to me one time. I recommend checking a fic / chapter just after posting it. Scan it to make sure the formatting translated correctly. That way if you have bad formatting errors you can deleted it and try again. Since you already have hits and reviews you certainly don’t want to delete it.

    You can try to upload the file as second chapter and edit the details to let the readers know the formatting has been fixed (please read the second chapter). Or something,

    It is difficult to read the way it is now.

    When this happens, pull up your original document …word or works or whatever. I use works and yeah it sucks (especially the spell checker). Anyways, at the front of every line that is suppose to be a new paragraph push the enter/return/paragraph key. Yeah -- I used the word return ---I’m dating myself.

    The convert the document to HTML -- again.

    This will do one of two things. 1) it will space it normally once you reconvert it to HTML and post it. 2) it will add one extra line between all paragraphs once you convert it and post it.

    Either of these are better than having them all together.

    Keep in mind they way it looks in the new document in your processor after HTML conversion in not necessarily the way it will look once it is translated to AFF.

    You can try to edit the chapter inside AFF, but I’ve not be able to get this to work as far as editing spacing goes -- just text within the spacing.

    Just a suggestion take it or leave it.

    Thank you for sharing your fic with us. That last bit mage me giggle and giggle.

    Cupnjava c[~]~~~*sip*

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  • From ANON - Morgiana on September 03, 2004
    Hey, this is absolutely great! I really like "inversed" fics.o fuo fun.
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