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Reviews for Chocolate

By : iamzuul
  • From ANON - okamikun on May 23, 2005
    see not even the chocolate will stop sanzo
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  • From ANON - Harmonie Des Anges on April 28, 2005
    God, I love your work. Good Enough was a masterpiece of Saiyuki fanfiction and Chocolate just continues the perfection. You are truly one of the few, the VERY few writers out there that I believe has a FUCKING CLUE about Saiyuki, with the way some people write the characters you'd think they'd never seen the series. *sigh* Oh well, if I can find just a bit more fiction like yours I will be more than happy. I'm sure you're right about the celibacy thing in Buddism, although I do think it's optional. I found out a small tidbit of interesting information that you may already know about because you, in a round about way, mentioned it in your fic. There is no law or creed in Buddism that says homosexuality is wrong. So it is all right for buddists to be gay. When I found that out I just couldn't stop laughing. I really did enjoy this fic, though on that last part, I do think Goku snores, I'm not sure but I think he does. *shrugs* Oh well, who really cares the fic was fantastic and I loved every smutty moment. ^_^
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  • From ANON - seizansha on March 21, 2005
    wow!!!! this is so amazing!!! yours is the first i've come across to go so into the sex and yet fit so well within the original story.

    bravo *bowing in worship*
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  • From ANON - Remus on February 26, 2005
    AAAAAAWWWWWW that was so cute they way sanzo fucked goku into the bed
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  • From ANON - Tendrilrake on February 20, 2005
    (Couldn't be bothered to sign in) Aww!!! And here I was hopping Gojyo would have heard! *Curses hangovers* Oh well! B-e-a-u-tiful lemon! *Wink* I had to read it again I couldn't get enough of it! Mind you, I still for the life of me cannot imagin Sanzo on the bottom... oh well! Keep writting, I enjoy your work!
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  • From SayuriNakamura on February 12, 2005
    Excellent one shot! (But maybe...we'll get more nummy yaoiness from you? *hint hint* ^_^) Very well written, and you actually had the charecters in their respective personas, which made it even better to read--overall, a terrific story, and I can't wait to read more from you! ^_^ *glomples* Jaa matta ne!
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  • From ANON - Balarochibi on February 09, 2005
    0.0.....^_^ great you did a perfect job *gives iamzuul a cookie* you've just made me love sanzo+goku fics even more ^_^
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  • From ANON - Jeshika on December 17, 2004
    I read it once, and I absolutely loved it. Definetely one of the best 393's I've ever read.
    Yet, when I came back to it, a whole chuck of it is missing. Like... the entire beginning and middle. I think this has something to do with the site itself, but you might want to re-upload it just in case.
    It just doesn't make sense anymore, and I don't want to deny any 39 fan a story as good as yours. ^-^

    ~Jeshika
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  • From ANON - Lavenda on November 17, 2004
    Wow... *jaws opened* You kno wat? The lemon/lime part is so discriptive and I tot I'm gonna faint soon... Ha... All the more its a kool story ehx? Hope you write more! Cya!
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  • From ANON - doranobaka on October 19, 2004
    *fans herself* Wow. I do believe this is one of the hottest fanfics I have ever had the good fortune to read. :D Mad props to you!
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  • From ANON - Polka dot on September 06, 2004
    Oh this was really good, very nicely detailed. But come on, who doesn't like the taste of chocolate?
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  • From ANON - Emily on September 06, 2004
    !
    I loooooved the...dare I say it?!...EXQUISITE lemon portrayed in this here fanfic. The absense of chocolate in hard evidence was hardly missed, I assure you. Thank you for writing such an awesome story!
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  • From ANON - kitsune-oni on September 05, 2004
    I loved it!! XD
    Very well written, and the thoughts were so perfectly Sanzo...
    Makes me wonder if Sanzo's going to start liking chocolate after this... *g*
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  • From ANON - gallatica on September 05, 2004
    hehehe....yah! and here i was, hoping for some chocolatey action. XD
    but i like this version much, much more. heheh!!! it's great that you didnt feel the urge to rush anything..! and i really like your style of writing. *gives chocolate* (no pun intended)
    anyway!!!
    can i expect an epilouge?
    write more 39/93!!

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  • From ANON - keistje on September 05, 2004
    Wow...

    This turned out so very, very well. I loved the setup and the ending, and of course you know how hot I think your smut is. I *adore* how you write Sanzo. His thought processes are fascinating, and I love seeing Goku through his eyes. And their bedroom talk is *so* sexy!

    You've outdone yourself with this one. It's just awesome!


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