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Reviews for The Black Hawke--NEW FEB 1

By : Lin
  • From ANON - citrus baby on October 23, 2005
    LOOOOVVEED IT. i'm glad to see you writing again :] sorry i can't leave a longer review, but i gotta go. i'll be waiting for your next update, take care of yourself!

    much love
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  • From ANON - animelo on October 23, 2005
    Excellent as always. Love your writing. Love the character development and of course, the plot development. Please continue and even if it takes you some time to update--I really don't mind cause when you do update-It's awsome!
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  • From ANON - Lizzy on October 23, 2005
    Still sooo good. I can't help myself. Ooo He said he loved her! wheee! Kenshin and Misao is getting further too! *sorry i'm just a bit overwhelmed*
    Keep it coming! I'll be reading.
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  • From ANON - Megasuper on October 23, 2005
    Two great chapters again what more to say?Sorry for not beeing able to review both of the chapters but i have just discovered that you have updated two times.
    i have absolutely nothing more to say.Its just brilliant!Keep up the great work
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  • From ANON - Caskas_Lyrik on October 20, 2005
    Welcome Back! I hope you are doing much better now with your new medications...that can definately be a bump in the road! As far as the story goes.....I must continue to bow down to your expertise in writing! Simply the best..and I have so been anxiously awaiting your return to this fanfiction. The Black Hawke by far is my FAVORITE fanfiction!! I hope you update again when things are good in your life...hopefully there will be some drama with Kay next chapter!!! until then..God bless and take care!
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  • From ANON - Rhia on October 20, 2005
    YAY UPDATE! *breaks out the pom poms*
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  • From ANON - Rhia on October 08, 2005
    Please update *cries* I have been reading this story since it first came out on AFF, and I miss it. BTW, great character dynamic between Kenshin and Misao. >.
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  • From ANON - Kenta D on October 08, 2005
    Just so you know, I am still reading, and still being highly entertained. The way Kenshin deals with Misao is just priceless. Usually the alternate pairings doesn't quite work in my head, but you've managed to create new versions of favorites that flow quite well. Great writing, and I'm glad you're still going strong!
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  • From FiErY87ReD on September 11, 2005
    Oi, such a wonderful chapter! I most definitely am looking forward to the next addition to this wonderfully written story! Aoshi and Kaoru- it's so simple that it's unique in every aspect of the word! I don't read much in alternate pairings, but for you and for this story, I knew I had to make an exception. I absolutely can't wait 'til you decide to update with the next chapter! It seems other people are of the same mind as me, doesn't it? lol! Oh, and I must say that you have unique writing skills and that applying them to such an intriguing story has worked really well for you! Your descriptions- lovely! The mood of the story- wonderful! Do keep up the good work!

    Well, until the next chapter...

    Adios!

    Chow for now,
    Liz (Bethy-kun)
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  • From ANON - Fourth Child of Destiny (sexy_kagome_03) on July 23, 2005
    OMG!!! This story is...sooooo awesome! I never liked Aoshi/Kaoru pairings before...but now I'm a believer! ^_____^ This is sooooooooooo cool and so well written and so perfect! You got a really good thing going on here, and I can't wait to see what happens!
    This chapter was really, really deep...thank you for those words. You're doing a great thing for us who didn't have a good home or a stable set of parents and God knows how much I wish I could have had that. If only there really were people like Aoshi in your story, people so human and down to earth. I'm terribly sorry about your children, and I think we all understand what it feels like to lose someone you love.
    Congratulations on such a wonderful and touching story and for the sake of all of those who've been misunderstood and have or are in Sou's position, don't stop writting this story...

    It's helping us much more than you can ever imagine...


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  • From ANON - Myna on June 08, 2005
    I love this story! It's the best I've read so far! Please keep on writing!
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  • From ANON - Sosoru (Not logged in) on May 29, 2005
    Hey,

    I know it's been a while since I've left a review or read your story. I just got finished catching up. Sorry to hear about your kitty. I love my animals and I hate losing any of them. Hope your boys have safe travels. Good update.

    Take care,

    Sosoru
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  • From ANON - Wow on May 29, 2005
    Just wanted to say that i just began your story and I thinks it's awesome. The depictions are humane, but real, and I love all the OOCness. I also love the pairing. Aoshi is HOT!
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  • From ANON - kamorgana on May 25, 2005
    How come this fic is not tagged N/C??? I won't develop about the complete OOCness and other flaws, because I certainly wouldn't have read this if the tag had been there. A young girl getting assaulted (you try to be ambiguous, but sorry, you don't play on the line well enough) by a stranger in a park, liking to be raped, is this the beginning of your *love* story here?? Rape is what it takes to "frigid" women to like sex???? The tags are mandatory at least before the first chapter if you don't have space for them in the summary. *angry* I'll add that I left only one negative review in five years (in ff.net) and I would have respected your space and views if if you had warned as every other writer (yaoi, yuri, N/C, etc...)here does.
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  • From ANON - AlexaNight on May 14, 2005
    Oh I just love Soujiro. He is one of my favorite characters. Seeing Aoshi rough him up was memorable as well. I'm so looking forward to the next chapter!
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