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Reviews for Broken

By : nocturnemskoneko
  • From lindajrjt on January 30, 2008
    This story is very well written and while I cannot say it has been a happy one I have enjoyed reading it. This definitely shows and evil side to Akito. At somme point I do hope it is updated although since it has been quite a long time, I am guessing that will not happen and that is a shame because it is well worth it.
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  • From ANON - ree on October 30, 2006
    that was soo sad!!!!!!! i now fuckin' hate akito! hope you update soon!
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  • From Ofir on November 29, 2005
    i've seen you haven't updated in quiet awhile...plz update! i found you story great! and i really wish to know what happens next 0_0..so, plllzz ^_^
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  • From ANON - Flightoffancy on October 02, 2005
    I found your storyto be not only quite moving but also a natural progression from where the anime ended. I always felt that Akito would never embrace Torhu's empathy but ultimately try to get revenge and to humiliate her. Also to punish those who would protect her. So while it was violent, I thought it fit Akito's personality perfectly. You kept everybody involved and brought them together in an atmosphere of acceptance which is what the Fruba is all about.
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  • From ANON - mandi on July 26, 2005
    ok.. when does kyou get 2 beat the shit outa akito?? =P there r more chap. commin right? hope so... good luck & good writing! btw read it all in 1 day and completly loved it!!!

    ~mandi~
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  • From ANON - kim on July 15, 2005
    omg you have to update soon!!! i must know what happens next!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - nonengel on July 11, 2005
    wow

    never saw this before tonight, and about 2 hours ago i decided to give it a shot. This was worth far more than those two hours. I will keep an eye out for this.
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  • From ANON - possesiveicemaiden on July 04, 2005
    hi. I LOVE THIS STORY! PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!
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  • From ANON - WOW on July 03, 2005
    OMG I am in love with the story live. please please please KEEP WRITING!!!!!
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  • From ANON - fanfictionlover on June 18, 2005
    okay, please dont tell me ur trying to make akito a good guy. Really...that is what its starting to sound like. I want to see him get what he deserves the bastard. Well keep writing good story.

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  • From ANON - KyouxTohru Fan on May 12, 2005
    The first time I read this chapter I was hooked on this story. I stayed up all night just so I could finish it. Or at least finish what chapters were there. I literally screamed when I saw that it was continued. Please, you have to update soon, OMG I love this story. Sad at the beginning, but very very good. Please keep up the good work and I hope after you finish this, you make even more. You're very good at fanfics. Ja ne~
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  • From ANON - BRanwen on May 12, 2005
    Love the story...but you have to keep writing.......I am enjoying the story to much....
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  • From ANON - Musashi Naki on May 11, 2005
    hi!! I just wanted to say that I lurved your story! It was so very sad, and what Akito did....i can see him doing that to, the evil prick >.< anywho, i hope that you will update soon, cuz I can't wait to read the next chapter!! ^.^
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 25, 2005
    update
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  • From ANON - InflatedHuyen on April 25, 2005
    I love your story. I hope you update it soon. Poor Kyo and Tohru. Never liked Akito even though I favor the bad guys over the good most anime. Update Please.
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