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By : PatoSan
  • From ANON - monica on November 03, 2005
    that was unbelievable. The way you were holding everything off until the end. *applause*
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  • From ANON - Luciology on November 03, 2005
    This was an excellent study of repressed desire, guilt and love. Very nicely written overall. There are a couple of places where the tense changes and sometimes words, or partial words seem to run into each other.
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  • From ANON - PIKACHU GODDESS on May 23, 2005
    WOW! I didn't expect that ending...it was a shock! I truly liked your story, I hope to read more!

    PIKACHU GODDESS
    (o';'o)
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  • From ANON - Nikki on November 01, 2004
    I would read anything you write ever, this was fabulous, I ketp starting over to see if I missed who it was about, but by hte end...wow.
    You are such a gifted writter, simply amazing. Please write more!
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