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Reviews for I'm Begging You Please!

By : Cassie05
  • From PurplePumpkin on November 18, 2007
    I really like this story and I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From KawaiiBabiii on September 25, 2007
    I love this story. Please continue it. =]
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  • From ANON - The Infamous Pinky on July 27, 2006
    I like it you have style and your erotic play is definately intresting. I also like the characters involved Considering I have though about this myself. Good job and i look forward to reading more from you.

    Pinky
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  • From ANON - toni on December 22, 2005
    Great I'd love if you'd continue but since it's been over a year since the last update, I don't see it happening.
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  • From ANON - Deity on December 14, 2005
    Wow, you're an excellent writer. I really hadn't expected something like this when I was looking through the last few listed stories in the back pages. ^_^ I saw that you hadn't updated in......a long time. But that's OK, I just thought this story deserved another review. ^_^ Well, if you ever do continue this I'll be eternally greatful, and well, really happy. So, if some time in the future you do decide to continue; keep up the good work and I'll review definatley next time! Bye. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Lyorna on November 23, 2005
    ok i would wirte more but i don't have enought time but you said you needed atleast five reviews and i dont know how many you have but youHAVE GOT to CONTINUE this Pleez!
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  • From ANON - Kat on November 10, 2005
    Gorgeous! Beautiful! Magnificent! More! Must have more!
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  • From ANON - swyen on October 21, 2005
    i love this story so far, please continue ;)
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  • From ANON - mew on August 04, 2005
    this fanfiction is great. You should hurry up and make a new chapter. Need to get to the *good* part.
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  • From hentaibubblehead on June 13, 2005
    That was really really good! Please please please continue! I love the whole idea and plot and everything! I can't wait for the next chapter! *adds to recommended reading* Please continue! Really good so far!
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  • From ANON - FallinOutFallinIn on May 12, 2005
    Okay- CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM. This is not meant as a FLAME, get it? I have no RIGHT to flame a writer because I'm not even a good author myself.

    Erm, okay... Moving on.

    Characters were a bit OOC. *nods* Improve on that.

    Your grammar is... well, not really that good. I caught sight of a lot of run-on sentences; and when you write a fic, use Microsoft Word or anything that detects grammar and spelling mistakes. Don't trust it too much, though... sometimes I am way better than the grammar checker. ^^;; Seriously.

    Uhm... add a little bit more detail to make the fic more interesting.

    And... last but not the least: Although this is AFF, lemons are not really the most important thing. I know this is a PWP, but you should at least add a bit more... erm, detail, like I said before.

    Hope this helps. You should not lose hope especially when you love to write. ^_^ "Great people fail sometimes, too." :) You know what? To tell you the truth, I fail too. ^_^ But I never give up and I will never abandon by fics. Never. :) So don't mind the people that flame you just because of your writings. *nods* They help you sometimes, right? If ever someone flames me, it motivates me more to write better and improve my style. ^_^

    If you ever need a beta reader, I'm always here. :) Although I can suggest a few better ones than me, but they are always busy. ^^;; Here's my profile if ever: http://www.fanfiction.net/~fallinoutfallinin.

    Oh, and one more thing:

    "Failure teaches success"

    ...signing off.
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  • From ANON - LA Bratt on April 14, 2005
    Please continue this story. Shu/Ryu is my favorite pair, but I always feel sorry for Y. You create a hot story with my favorite characters.
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  • From ANON - harahettamonkeyking on April 04, 2005
    im not allowed to review under 5 different names, am i? HOPEFULLY THIS THE FIFTHE REVIEW AND U WILLL CONTINUE!
    pleaase continue.
    byebye^_^
    ~~harahettamonkeyking
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  • From ANON - Yana on March 18, 2005
    oooooooooooo when is th next chapter coming out
    i love this story
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  • From ANON - JADE on March 05, 2005
    it was really good
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