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Reviews for Hearts of Darkness, Hearts of Light

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  • From ANON - Gitona on November 27, 2004
    Oh I likey!Is that it?!O_O....I want more!X3....email me if u add more please.
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  • From ANON - Anguipes on October 24, 2004
    Alright, review junkie, here ya go:

    Overall: OMGOMGOMGOMG more please!!!!

    But, a few stylistic comments. Please understand that these are not comments on your writing itself (which is excellent), simply the way that you present it.

    This may be a personal peeve, but I'm sure others will agree: try to steer clear of artful "misspellings" like "cum" - there's no reason not to spell it "come", and "cum" tends to lend a less mature, l337 5p34k atmosphere to a fic which is highly distracting if it shows up in an otherwise well written fic.

    Secondly, try to find out how adultfanfiction.net posting handles italics. /-------/ is fine, but italics again have a more professional and easy-to-read quality.
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  • From ANON - Naria Lacour de Fanel on October 11, 2004
    I am usually n ofn of Dilly n' the Dragonslayers...but this is FABULOUS!! ^_^ Please post more because it seems like it will be a GREAT story! I love stories in which Dilandau's true ,softer nature is revealed and *maybe* embraced! Then again, I always enjoy what I call Dillyrotica...Yay! Dilly smut! Mmmm...Dilandau...It's a shame he turns into a girl...especially such a silly girl who eats snails EW!

    P.S. Keep postin and I'll keep reviewin'!
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  • From ANON - Lola on October 10, 2004
    nice start... I hope for more soon!!! *blink blink*
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