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  • From on January 18, 2007
    Over all, you have a great grasp of how making people care about the characters and what awaits them. You keep the reader hooked and though it should be the usual thing, I rarely find this in FF anymore, so this is a very welcomed treat. The pace is right, not too fast, not too slow, and the alternating POV is a great thing for character development and insight into their minds. Personally, more than action, that's what really interest me in stories. To know what the characters think, why, how they feel. I'm very intrigued now to know how this will follow...


  • From ANON - shadowbk on October 10, 2005
    please, for your dear life, follow the fic U_U or at least tell me if it is complete in other web

  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on October 10, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

  • From ANON - Snowfall on July 10, 2005
    Excellent plot, great vocabulary and grammar and no overusage of adverbs (a pet peeve of mine). Your writing really flows, no breaks or skips. Even though I don't know the characters, you make them real by describing their inner turmoil. Great work. Keep it up.

    Snowfall

  • From ANON - sparky16 on July 04, 2005
    Please please update soon!!!!

  • From ANON - Anon on May 14, 2005


  • From ANON - Gemini on April 27, 2005
    Must have more please! This is very well written. You really captured both their characters well!^_^

  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on March 29, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

  • From ANON - Karen on November 04, 2004
    I have to admit I wonder what goes on in that head of yours. Russia? Oh lord, this can't be good. Alright, I admit it I'm hooked. I'm gonna be watchin for the rest of the chapters. By the way, you will be fillin us in on why the villagers were so 'warm and friendly' later on right?


  • From oldwolf on October 27, 2004
    This is my first read through, but the story's very interesting so far. The alternating POV's help a lot. I hope to see more soon.

  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on October 19, 2004
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

  • From ANON - Emma on October 16, 2004
    I really liked your story please write more!!!!
    I thought it was great....

  • From ANON - B on October 12, 2004
    GREAT!! I'm happy you put so much effort into your work. I have been reading "Bills" and am looking forward to the new posts !!
    I love WHR fics esp good ones such as yours !! Please keep at it and up date soon as possible !! I'm craving more :)

    Thanks again!! Its A+ work!!

  • From ANON - Hellkat on October 11, 2004
    While I enjoyed reading the original "Bills" I must admit that this version is extremely well written. I'm very interested to see what else your new flow will bring.

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