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Reviews for One day in April

By : Yaoilady
  • From ANON - crazyb1tch85 on December 31, 2005
    *continues last post* half my post got deleted... *sigh*

    4- Zoro gets super pissed and slaughters all enemies on sight.
    5- Zoro gets all mushy with Luffy. Sanji glares at him with a *now you're getting all possessive you hypocrite*
    6- work it out from there

    1- Sanji confronts Zoro throwing at his face his lack of support, which gets at Zoro.
    2- Zoro avoids Luffy feeling guilty
    3- Luffy gets al teary and looks for Sanji for a shoulder to cry on.
    4- Sanji considers this opportunity to try to woo Luffy, but holds back.
    5- work it out from there.

    Right now all is revolving around Zoro's reluctance about the pregnancy, which is getting resolved (you can see it in the last two chapters), plus it's kind of difficult to put Sanji in between... But I agree with one of the posters, Ace SHOULD make an appearance; first to get angry at Luffy (we all know why) and then beating some sense in Zoro (if it isn't already done). After all, he IS the big brother, he should feel protective towards his baby brother. go write something along these lines.
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  • From ANON - crazyb1tch85 on December 31, 2005
    Mmmmm~~... *considers dragging her to the street* You know what? that won't do, because I NEED to find out how this story finishes @_@ although i'm not that much into male pregnancy. I have re-read the last posted chapter, and the issues between Zoro and Luffy seemed kind of solved. I think time and a little conversation would settle it, I was thinking maybe getting Sanji in between that, but it looks useless (he's not an ass when things are serious).
    So here are some ideas, I made small lists of how a situation can develop:

    1- Sanji getting all supportive and corny stuff with Luffy.
    2- Zoro going ballistic after seeing this.
    3- Zoro getting in a serious fight (you know, katanas, kicks and blood and "super pissed" glares) with Sanji.
    4- Zoro and Sanji still pissed, but Luffy comes to the rescue.

    1- Zoro and Luffy solving their current dilemma (Zoro being kind of pissed yet)
    2- Sanji butting in (i don't know how, figure out from other readers @_@)
    3- Zoro supporting Luffy's following months of pregnancy

    1- After solving their issues, they encounter some enemy
    2- Luffy gets all pissy (he is emotional in this state) and wants to fight.
    3- Before they can stop him, he gets kicked on the tummy.
    4- Baby dies. (just kidding XD
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  • From ANON - Ebby on December 29, 2005
    I want Ace to show up...and if you really love me, have him fall for Sanji. Later Sanji falls for Ace too and yaoi goodness. ^-^

    Meanwhile, Zoro is having a hard time with not being able to do stuff with Luffy, sex wise, well he can but he's afaird of hurting Luffy and/or the baby, after the thrid month. Chopper has lost his mind trying to figure out how the baby is going to born. Usopp is trying to baby proff everything. Nami has gone nuts at thought of being 'anuty' and Robin is the only sane one.

    That sounds like fun to me. Take some or none I don't really care, but you wanted help, so yeah.

    Hope your able the update now, please

    Love
    Ebby
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  • From ANON - bino san on December 28, 2005
    this is kind a hard story to write, dont ya think? cos zoro already accepted luffy's choice.. and well. what more is there to say?! shit.. i don't have any ideas.. *its cos i am a SanZo fan*.. just try to give it a happy endign or so..
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  • From ANON - Jewel on November 22, 2005
    *pouts* hey, you know what? I'm in college too and i found a way to help me have more free time. I actually use a schedule. Maybe this can help you out a bit... and let me read some more of this fic ^^
    have fun at college and update when you can!
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  • From ANON - Dragonheart287 on November 03, 2005
    MPreg.... in One Piece

    ...

    I...LOVE...YOU!!!

    SQUEEEEEE! I LOVE THIS MAN! And a favourite pairing of mine too! If I were Nami I'd certainly be squealing and planning how I'm gonna spoil that baby rotten. I know how hard the college work is....I guess I should be doing mine actually ^^;.....but I look foward to the next update.

    ^_^
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  • From ANON - chelzi on October 30, 2005
    dude, you gotta start editing this stuff!!! it's a wonderful story with a great plot and is beautifully put together, but the grammar is KILLING it for me!!!!! please fix it up a little!! PLEASE!!!!!!! I BEG OF YOU!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Evermist on October 29, 2005
    I know I updated about thirty minutes ago, but I was just wondering if you could try to email me when you update, please! Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Evermist on October 29, 2005
    Sweet!!! I knew! I could tell when he pulled Robin into the kitchen to talk to her. Yay! ...::ahem::As you can probably tell from this, I'm rather fascinated *coughobssessedcough* with the prospect of pregnant boys.
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  • From ANON - redtail on October 02, 2005
    OH OH MAKE THE BABY A GIRL WITH ZORO'S HAIN EYES AND LUFFYS BODY STUCTURE just a sejestion WRITE MORE SOON PLEASE

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  • From sharem on September 23, 2005
    I like this story so far and I really do hope that you update soon. But it's understandable that you aren't...^_^ I'm putting this in my Favs...
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  • From ANON - YJ on August 21, 2005
    Argh!!! NNooooooo! Y....yyy....Please update soon... i wonder how Sanji will come in....make it good with lots of jealousy....*evil cackle* I'll be waiting...
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  • From ANON - Liliath on August 01, 2005
    awww....I hope you can ifx it ASAP coz this fic is so superb, the waiting is just killing me!! ^^ *huggles*
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  • From ANON - Seras on July 21, 2005
    Ah This is so cute. Bad Zoro for being mean to Luffy at first! UGH! Oh well. Still love my Zoro. *Hugs Zoro, Luffy and Sanji* My three favorite guys from One Piece...Wait. Where is...SHANKS! lol.
    Sorry, the story is so cute. Had to have the trouble but it was interesting. I was sitting at the edge of my seat thinking "Zoro you jerk." And other randomness stuff about Zoro. Then he got over it (yeah!) and now he's back to loving Luffy. *Sniff* Cute.
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  • From ANON - Shadows on July 16, 2005
    I mean no offense, but could you please add the "MPREG" warning to your story's summary? There are some of us that don't really like to read it...

    I was hoping for a good yaoi, and was surprised at the hints (which I discredited while reading through), followed by Luffy's admission.
    It's perfectly fine if some like it, but it does bother some. I would also like to complement you on a story that's written well from what i read... keep up the good work. ^-^
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