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Reviews for I'll Come For You

By : animeboy
  • From kadajchibi on April 25, 2007
    its kindof on crack! no offense! wat made u think of these characters in these roles?
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  • From ANON - ShadowSlayer (Too lazy to log in) on April 08, 2005
    This isn't bad and a really good concept... I do have a few suggestions though... While Tsukasa's being raped it would be nice if you could have him crying, whimpering or crying or something along that line... Also, the guy who was raping him, what happened to him during the whole fight scene... also, last but not least, I think it would be really cool if you could either have a flashback to the day before when Tsukasa was raped or begin with that instead... also, he can't be a virgin and be raped for the first time if he was raped the day before... =^-^= Great work though and this definetely has lots of potential... Hope to read more soon...
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  • From on November 10, 2004
    Good job writing this, and it's a nice idea, however....I have a few things that I'd likepoinpoint out. Seeing as you are, or such you claim to be, a first-time fanfic writer, I'll simply tell you two things.
    ne ine is...I think we'd all appreciate it if you could put a bit of space between your seperate paragrephs. Otherwise, it looks like one big clump of text and can be overwhelming to your readers. A little 'breathing space' is all I ask...

    And the secon thing being...at the end of your fic, in the Author's Note, you put -- and I quote -- 'if enough people say nice things about me, ill post the next chapter.' Please...do not do this. It makes you seem sou desperate and stuck-up. Perhaps try something more subtle like...'I think I'll hold off on further chapters until I see that the need be to write them,' or 'Please review and help inspire me to write more chapters! Bwahaha!' See...it's not that difficult. After all, a review is constructive criticism, where we can try to help you improve upon your writing. ^^ Not all of us are simply going to say that it was wonderful without telling a few improvable points. ^^ We don't all sing praises, although many of us do...>.o Good luck with your writing, however...I believe that you can get better! ^^ We all can!
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  • From ANON - sirhcnotilih on October 21, 2004
    very very good!
    i applaud!
    bravo! bravo!
    4 out of 5!
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