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By : SakuraBubblesMOO
  • From ANON - YuukiSan on February 07, 2005
    YuukiSan: I loved that story. I admit that at the beginning I didn't really like it, but something drew me in anyways. Now I love it. You've grown so much as the story progressed and I can't wait until the next story that you write.

    I loved the ending, I knew that whatever you did it was going to be amazing and it was. I loved Shigure's response to Hatori about Yuki seeing Akito again before he died. The "eat shit and die" thing was classic. I admit during the epilogue I cired again and only really good authors get my to cry.

    All I have to say is never give up and keep writing, until next time.

    ~YuukiSan & NinjaMouse.
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  • From Mitsuki on February 04, 2005
    Just finished reading the whole thing, and it's really good. Yuki and Haru are ever so sweet, and I don't usually read fics about them (I've been searching for Kyoru ones but I can't find any! ;_;) Nevertheless, this was really sweet, and the ending was touching! Keep writing ^^ Maybe next time, a Kyoru? XD
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  • From ANON - YuukiSan on February 03, 2005
    YuukiSan: Oh my goodness. I must say that this is the first story that has made my cry. You can't kill Yuki, that's just too cruel. Too both the readers and to Haru.

    I love the carnival scene where Yuki and Haru hug for the first time after three months. Makes you all warm and fuzzy inside, and it's just so damn cute. And those outfits...damn girl you know how to get the juices flowing! *pictures Haru and Yuki in matching oufits and drools all over keyboard*

    NinjaMouse: Well since she's off in la-la land it's time to say my two cents. I do like the story line and the concept. Though I will admit that there are some parts I can't picture myself, such as Yuki going down on Haru. But the explaination that you put in does make sense, so I guess it works in the end (wow that made no sense...I've been hanging around her *points to YuukiSan* and Kurai too much).

    YuukiSan: Again I say that I love this story, and that last chapter was amazing. Everyone can write a death or almost death fic, but not everyone can write on well, and you did. If you wanted to kill Yuki from the start do it, don't care what other people on the site says or are going to say...just do it. I can tell that whatever you do in the last chapter, it's going to be amazing, you've grown so much in writing this story and it shows.

    ~YuukiSan & NinjaMouse.
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  • From ANON - PainfulRememberance on January 23, 2005
    Nice work! Update!
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  • From ANON - kaitlyn on January 10, 2005
    aaawww! i don't think i've gushed about how utterly adorable these couples are, or how many incense sticks i'm going to burn in yuki's honor cuz he's so self-sacrificing, or how hott kyo is, or how cute tohru is, or a whole bunch of other things, but i think, by this point, you've gotten the idea, and this isn't a problem any longer! i think yuki should carve a windchime with all the zodiac animals on it, and put the rat and the cow on one little bell/chime thing, put the dog and the snake and the dragon together on another, put the tiger and the sheep together, then the monkey and the rabbit and the boar together, then there's the horse and the rooster, and then there can be one with a cat, and he can be with a butterfly or bird to be tohru! that could be cool! OR, maybe a chime that has a dangle-jingly-thing that's black on one side and white on the other, and another dangle-jingly-thing that's a pair oof gray eyes! oo! im all excited now to see what you're gonna make!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 05, 2005
    good
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  • From ANON - stutterfly on January 02, 2005
    iieee, yuki-kuuuun.... [sniffle] ;_;

    i hope things get better for all of them. poor haa-kun, he's torn without yuki-san. mean, meaaaan akito, how dare he call haru a slut. [pets haru and chews on his hair]

    this story is really good, and i hope you can update soooon. pleeease? ^_^


    ~ angie
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  • From ANON - PainfulRememberance on December 30, 2004
    good chapter! Poor Yuki-kun -sob- everything must be all right! -sob- ahem, anyway hopefully everything turns out ok right? Anyway update soon please.
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  • From ANON - Kyatto on December 30, 2004
    Write more please! Write more everyday!!! Squee!!! Bring Yuki home!!!
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  • From ANON - Miyuki on December 19, 2004
    I started crying towards the end of that chapter x.x; So sad. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Random Person Reading This Fic on December 18, 2004
    Dear God woman...YOU MUST UPDATE!! This is extremely well written, I'm usually not a huge fan of Yaoi pairings but thanks to your fic you've turned me around! Although I've never bashed them I've just never really read them, this is a truly wonderful fic and I hope you update this as soon as you can!
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  • From ANON - Mia on December 18, 2004
    This is a great fic, what can I say. I'm speechless! XD;
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  • From ANON - Goldn on December 17, 2004
    Wow, your writing is amazing! I think you are really able to capture the characters, and even all the little secrets behind the story. You area great author ^^
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  • From ANON - TRENA XP on December 12, 2004
    HURHUR look what I found on here while looking more more Haru/Yuki smut! =D Um... I had to read this chapter again... because it's AFF.net and I felt obliged to.. XD Awesome though. I was actually thinking about re-reading the start of this fic, but then I just read this chapter... o.o''

    Anyway I know you didn't put the newer chapters up here so I'll be vague about details, but it's hard to think that these happy Haru and Yuki are the same ones who yesterday made me cry so much I almost drowned (not literally of course.. but still, you get the point.) I almost couldn't believe I was reading the same fic. The two sides are just so different and so powerful and so similar (...except one involves love.. xD) and just so.. wow.

    I love this chapter. Why couldn't the whole fic stay this happy and not have me worrying about death? T_T

    Oh btw is anything on here different than on FF.net so I can like... go over it again here if it is... XD


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  • From ANON - Laura (Lord Kamatari/okama no kama tsukai) on December 07, 2004
    heyy... this is a good story... i haven't read a good yaoi in a while... (not that i'm... in to those... kind of things.. eh heh...), yuki's so cute, and haru's so hot (it's always the hot ones that are that way, isn't it? curses...)
    i like kyo/tohru pairings too, so i get two favourites for the price of one in this fic! yay! update soon. i dunno what the curse is either (can't be bothered buying the manga yet), but your theory is a good one, and it makes sense as well...
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