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Reviews for One Night, One Body, One Soul

By : shuiede
  • From ANON - kookookitty on July 13, 2006
    the words you use are wonderful, very descriptive. the images they conjure up are incredable! if you would like... i would consider proofreading and correcting your grammer so that the words you so eloquently choose in your stories, aren't deminished. it seems that you write with your emotions, you shouldn't lose that, reading your work, those emotions are raw and the reader can truely feel what you express. the delivery and verb tense need work. if you would like, i believe that this sites has beta readers available, or you can contact me at the listed address.
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  • From ANON - yamiyugiforever on October 09, 2005
    I loved it...I wanna read a chapter where misao is in laber
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  • From ANON - Samurai_Xuxa on October 23, 2004
    wow. That was great!! Whoo!! ^_^
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