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Reviews for Crossing the Line

By : HauntedReality
  • From ANON - the other Anon on February 16, 2005
    ... who's not related to the one above me. Somebody didn't get their pacifier this morning and is trying to take it out on you. Rest assured, most of us GET that you can't do romance in a fan fiction without taking the principals out of character somewhat.

    Please continue undaunted.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 07, 2005
    Everything is laughably OOC and insufferably whiny. Neither Sano nor Kenshin showed ANY such disgustingly overt affection to Kaoru in the ORIGINAL WORK. Face the facts. Fuck this shit, be honest and write a self-insertion fic in which every male falls in love with you if you crave the attention but this is a bucket of vomit.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 07, 2005
    Everything is laughably OOC. Neither
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  • From ANON - catti-dono on February 06, 2005
    I think I need a kleenex with that Kenshin and Kaoru parting but it was tastfully done... very good....
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  • From ANON - DivinePunishment on February 05, 2005
    No matter how much I love Kenshin/Kaoru fics and how partial I happen to be to them, I'm liking this story. Ah, poor Kenshin, he isn't going to win, is he? :(
    Well, there's always Megumi! =D

    Anywho, loving the major drama. Crazy cool story. You left us kinda on a cliff here, so you best be updating soon. That or I'll be forced to maim you. :) Not really, but empty threats are fun.

    Peace,
    DivinePunishment
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  • From thebigW on February 04, 2005
    I'm still chewing on how mature Yahiko is... I haven't swallowed it yet, but I'm sure it'll go down eventually. The moment between Sano and Karou was sweet, then bittersweet. I can't for the life of me figure out how you'll end this, but I'll hang on...
    Ciao!
    W.
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  • From ANON - De Lazy Lady Lime on January 30, 2005
    Aloha!

    Oh!! This is so heart wrenching! I'm trying really hard to be ok with a Sano/Kaoru pairing but I really just can't see Kenshin and Megumi going together. I mean the age gap is slighly smaller but eww... I just don't know what you are going to do with Kenshin if she goes with Sano. I just can't see the dojo without the redhead...*sigh* well I guess I'll just have to wait and see what you do. Yea, well I think everyone needs a helicopter and mysterious woods to hide in. ^_^

    ~ De Lazy Lady Lime
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  • From thebigW on January 01, 2005
    Ah, Megumi-sama! She really is my goddess, and thank you for that monologue. Sano should be in town picking a fight to kick someone's ass right about now. You've made Yahiko much more insightful than he ever was in the anime, but hey!... You can keep this going forever, I'll keep reading.
    Thanks!
    W.
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  • From ANON - S.Malfoy on December 30, 2004
    Hey, another great chapter, I've been following this on MediaMiner but have not been able to review because I do not have an account (and it doesn't allow Annonymous reviews either), but I love this story. I know its a S/K, but now I'm almost rooting for K/K anyways! LoL, well, I can't wait for more updates, they are pretty fast, and I enjoy this story immensely. Great work!
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  • From ANON - catti-dono on December 29, 2004
    HauntedReality...what a great love triangle....god this is great...keep it up....oooh to have such a thing happen....sighs...oh well at least I can read about them...domo arigatou for updating....catti-dono
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  • From ANON - De Lazy Lady Lime on December 29, 2004
    Aloha!
    hmmm, well it seems that when ever a character enters the woods...we all scream at the screen "NOOO!! NOOO!! DON'T GO IN THERE!!" And ofcourse the worst senario happens. I am still a skeptic about the Sano/Kao thing...but you make a good story...And I hate to see Kenshin tormented even more but you know what they say the early bird gets the worm and since in the beginning of this story Kenshin had NO intention of ever *ahem* staking a claim on her...Whose to say even if Sano backs down that Kenshin still won't act...So based on your points and story characters..plots..yadda yadda yadda...btw the same goes for Megumi and the claiming...Sano seems to be a good guy in here so maybe he could change and be a good bread winner thus helping Kaoru to have a happy life instead of having a heart broken fence walking unemployed rurouni (I love Kenshin with all my anime heart) but this case goes to the birds...oops I mean Sano. * _~
    looking forward to see what happens next...*hands you a pail of water, a private helicopter and the deed to a mountain top hide away* incase they bring fire and brimstone you have a way to survive, a method of escape and a place to hide! James Bond style!! tee hee!!
    ~ De Lazy Lady Lime
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  • From ANON - whirleeQ on December 29, 2004
    I think this is the most in-character rurouni kenshin fic I have ever read. beautiful job with this. It's heartbreakingly honest - I especially loved the interaction between Kenshin and the bandit (his conscience with a sword ;) )

    Even though this is a kaoru/sano fic I feel bad for kenshin, and I love it that I do. Beautiful writing, that it is.

    ;)

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  • From thebigW on December 26, 2004
    Yaa, that's good, heart-breakin' stuff. That Karou was so distraught that even Yahiko could see what his master couldn't was particularly enlightening. And... What about Megumi??? If you're brave, you'll have her find out about Sano's confession to Karou and pile it on even deeper.

    I sure hope you've figured a way out of this...
    Regards.
    W.
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  • From ANON - reene on December 26, 2004
    This is probably one of the best fics out there. You keep to the story line and it’s a well built story. You have the characters act natural, almost flawless. One part of me wishes for a Kaoru/Sano happily ever after and the other part of me hopes for a Kenshin/Kaoru. It’s so hard to pick which couple to cheer for.
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  • From ANON - catti-dono on December 25, 2004
    DAMN girlfriend that was sooooo intense yes its the same catti-dono from FF decided to come over to AFF for a time; love this chapter; bows to the great one.....
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