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Reviews for Bound by Family

By : SynchronizedLove
  • From ANON - LadySilverwings on July 14, 2004
    My god, continue this story! Please! I have Yami no Matsuei and I always did er aer about the relationship between the two brothers. Brilliant! I love your twists and turns. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - P1 on July 07, 2003
    Awesome. You really must continue this!
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  • From ANON - Wolf on June 21, 2003
    More,more,more!It's beautifully written.Simply....a great story so far.Plz tell me there'll be more!
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  • From ANON - Leland on June 16, 2003
    Very interesting and well-written as well. I hope that you do continue. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Akari on June 01, 2003
    Hmmmm not bad.
    But you got some odd HTML tags in there you may wanna fix and that whole first and last name mix up is a bit off putting...
    Oh, and you may want to refer to their father as san rather than sama. I don't think he deserves quite that much ect.ect.
    Otherwise, not too shabby. ^^
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  • From RinoaRed on May 26, 2003
    This is much better written than your first. I think it might become very good. One mistake though that seems repeating: Muraki is the SURname, not the first. Kazutaka is the first name, and mixing those just makes me awkward and distracts from the story. Please correct that and continue!
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