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Reviews for N_G High Skool Battle

By : Haruna
  • From ANON - Anon on January 02, 2005
    Heeeeeyyyyyyy.... That qwas aery cool capter. You're right: it's much clearer now. But something I don't really nderstand yet is: Does Eiri (Yuki) love Shuichi nw or not? Maybe it will be clear in the next chapter? Anyway: I think Eris "dark-side" is very sexy, through I hopre he won't hurt Shuichi. I'm really excited about how it goes along. Please update soon!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 29, 2004
    I think your story takes a strange turn. But it's still cool. I hope Yuki and Shuichi are stillv getting together. Anyway: update soon please
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  • From ANON - Blue Siren on December 27, 2004
    I liked the first chap (the only I have read so far) Its certainly a different concept... I'll be reading the next chappys and reviewigf them. I have a question though... why did you make Shu and Ryu brothers? I mean, there will be no hot sex between them? Aw that sucks... other than that Its all good^O~
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  • From ANON - Dana on December 27, 2004
    Oh by the way about the pairings in Yami no Matsuei I really don't like the idea of Tatsumi with Tsuzuki
    Now the idea of Muraki harrassing Tsuzuki sounds great but Tsuzuki returning his feelings is horrible i mean after all the things he's done! honestly the only pairing i like there is Tsuzuki/Hisoka which in gravi style really resembles Shichi(Tsuzuki)/Yuki(Hisoka) only Yuki would be the uke...
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  • From ANON - Dana on December 27, 2004
    Great chapter!!!

    lol When i said i prefer Taki/Shu i meant that if Taki should harrass someone it should be Shuichi not Ryuichi
    But i mostly hate Taki too even though there is one Taki/Shu story i like but there the rape never happened.
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  • From ANON - She who is bleeding from the ears on December 27, 2004
    Get. A. Beta. I cannot stress this enough. Seriously. I understand completely how difficult it can be to write in a foriegn language, but if you're going to write something and post it on the internet, RUN IT BY A FEW NATIVE SPEAKERS FIRST. That way, your English will improve and your story will read much more smoothly.

    Hell, even if you're writing a story in your native language, get a beta. Everyone should have one. It would make fanfiction sites a hell of a lot less painful to sift through.
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  • From ANON - Dana on December 13, 2004
    Yay Yami no matsuei!! Hisoka!
    I see how Taki feels about Ryu but i'm a little confused about his intentions torwards Shuichi, i personally like Shu/Taki much more than Ryu/Taki.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 13, 2004
    I'm really happy about the 8th chapter!! It's pretty cool, the fight and that stuff. I hope Shuichi and Eiri will be together soon. I would be a shae if Eiri wouldn't fall in love with him. It was also a funny chapter. The part were Shuichi cried so much is cool cause he emberasses Eiri so much (but he's a poor Shu-chan, Eiri always makes him cry). So write more and update quickly. Please!!1
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  • From ANON - Kathi on December 13, 2004
    I think it's totaly cool that Taki and Tathsua are fighting for Ryuichi. That's funny (a little bit). So I hope you update soon cause I'm really excited abou how it goes along. I hope Taki looses (cause he's such an ass)!! So, anyway, I looovvee it.
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  • From ANON - Nashii on December 13, 2004
    Tht was a reeaallyy col chapter. I like the crossover with YnM. It's a pity that Eiri ans Shuichi aren't "really" together yet, but this way it's more exciting. Pleeaaasseee write more soon.
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  • From ANON - Kathi on December 09, 2004
    Yeaahh, I love this story!!! This is so cool *and we all sit there in audience- land an clap our hand*. Please continue (I'm so happy that Shuichi and eiri are 'together' norw)
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  • From ANON - Nashii on December 09, 2004
    This was really funny. I absplutly loooovveee it. I'm really excited how it goeas along. The end of chapter 7 surprised me a little cause I actually didn't think Shuichi would do *it* with Eiri. But I think it's sweet!!!! Ryuichi and Tathsua make a real sweet couple too. I hope you update soon couse I can't waite to read more. *Hope Eiri and Shuichi will be together in the end*
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 09, 2004
    Heeeyyyyyyyyy. This was a really great chapter! I feel so sorry for the poor Shuichi, but I'm also happy that he and Eiri finally came each other *nearer*. I hope Eiri will fall in love with Shuichi!!1 Pleeeaaasssee update soon. I just can't waite for another chapter (greedy me!! *he he he*).
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  • From ANON - Dana on December 09, 2004
    Lol the ending was so funny.Poor Shuichi his story is so sad...
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  • From ANON - Kara on December 04, 2004
    Its smexy, so just finish it.
    And try using grammer fixes in typing programs like mircosoft word.
    (:
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