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Reviews for Break Through

By : Tairyn
  • From ANON - Dana on December 02, 2004
    Another great chapter! i wasn't dissapointed at all! i kind of expecetd it'd be Tohma . I liked how you portrayed him.
    I hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - dntfckwifme on December 02, 2004
    Mad? No, not at all. We had a differance of opinion, nothing to get all upset over. I'm sure we'll both live. ^^ but your chapter! sweet. Just.. sweet. Loved it. And Tohma, *nods* and Yuki.. deh bomb. Just perfection. But!! tis 7am and I haffa hurry off to catch da bus to 6th Form (school).. so, I'll see you in your next fantastic chapter. I really enjoyed reading this, set me up for the day!
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  • From ANON - Haruna on December 01, 2004
    NNNAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII???????????!!!!!!!!?????!!!!!!! MASAKA!! DON'T TELL ME DAT TOHMA.... TOHMA IS.... IS.... OH PLEASE GOD FORBIDS IT! TOHMA IS IN.... IN.... I TOT TOHMA WILL ONLY AND ONLY LOVE EIRI RITE? RITE? I CAN UNDAZTAND DA PAIRING OF RYU AND HIRO, HIRO AND TATSU and... and... Eiri and Ryu.... BUT HIRO AND TOHMA???!??!??!?!??!?!?! DAT IS SOOO.... uh... WOAH!!

    i dunno, what's u guys trying to write but it sounded to me dat Tohma have a something to Hiro and... uh... maybe it's not love but hey i wish u update soon, so dat i stop being in my sakano mood and honestly i really can't wait to read the next installment! da beginign of your chapter 3 really makes me wanna bang my head to my keyboard table, what does rubbing himself in front of his god meant? i understand lemon or lime situations but this one is really.... ugh! i hate it when i can't solve it! please tell more of shu's past~ if u keep making it a secret its making me ripping my hair off!! and i will rip myself bold if u dun post da next chapter soon! so.... ... beware hee hee hee hee
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  • From ANON - Tsuki on November 30, 2004
    You started good, then it falters.

    The whole thing about Yuki reading/writing manga.. yeah. I know it's an A/U, but come on.

    The fangirl Japanese is a bit annoying, too. But that's something all fanfiction seems to have nowadays.

    It was a good plot. Was.
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  • From ANON - Harper on November 30, 2004
    I LOVE IT! PLEASE UPDATE SOOONN!!!! I THINK IMMA GO THROUGH WITHDRAWL IF U DONT!
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  • From ANON - Dana on November 30, 2004
    This is such a great story Shuichi is so cute!
    I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - dntfckwifme on November 30, 2004
    I love it. Plain and simple. You need to update soon. I can't belive more people haven't reviewed. *thumbs up* awesome work.
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  • From ANON - OrangeJuice on November 29, 2004
    Aww, man, I love AU fics! I can't wait until the next installment, and I can't believe I'm the only one who's reviewed this...Maybe you just posted it...? I dunno. If I am the only one, then you definitely deserve more than just this! Anyway, good writing, very cool. I like how you depict the characters. This fic is a little nerdy at times, but I suppose that's what you're going for. Anyway, I can handle it. My friends act like that everyday >.
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