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Reviews for Alternatives

By : auburnimp
  • From ANON - Apollo on April 15, 2005
    Awww....it was sooooooo cute! It was one of the best stories that I've read in one sitting ^.^ Nah, beyond that it was artfully done, you had me sitting on the edge of my seat and hoping that this wouldn't turn into one of those stories that was sitting in the depths of the archives all forgotten about and not completed!

    I like the little scene at the end and you had me all worried, but I think it brought a nice completion...sorta like finishing a circle, ne?

    Ah well, off to see what else you've written!

    Apollo
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  • From aimless38 on January 07, 2005
    I read this all in one sitting. Incredible story dear! Excellently plotted and wonderfully characterized. I love Aya and Youji of course. But Ken is my next fav character. The pairing with Schul was pure genius. I would liked to have some Kenken and Schul smutty goodness though...LOL! You had me captivated from the first chapter.
    Hugs
    Amy

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  • From ANON - Melanie on December 11, 2004
    Oh! That was a wonderful series! I loved the ending chapter too, though for one second there I was really scared :) I also really like the way you characterized Farfarello. That was an interesting pairing to choose, and it fit very well in the fic. Anyways, this was a totally awesome series and I hope to read more from you soon! (maybe even a sequel...?) :)
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  • From ANON - Melanie on December 09, 2004
    ahh yay! The plot thickens! I was so happy when you mentioned Farf, if comes into this story I'll be so happy! Anyways, great job, once again, and I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - tareacel on December 08, 2004
    I've been following this since two days ago...I just read chapter 11...I am currently shaking so hard that its hard to type. This is one of the best Weiss stories I've read in a long time. Especially for a post-Gluhen fic. I don't think it even needs to be said that they are all in character, but I'll say it anyway. I love how you've dealt with Yohji's memory recovering, and even though I was a little put-off by the talent at first....for Yohji...it actually makes sense. You've done a wonderful job with the complex relationships in this story. Having all of Weiss in a house again after Gluhen would be complicated enough, and you add in two of Schwartz? I wouldn't have a clue how to begin. Its a complex web that you have done a wonderful job of constructing. I cannot WAIT to read more of this. Aya and Yohji are one of my favorite couples ever...and the way you use them alternately breaks and warms my heart. Omi and Nagi are a wonderful match, and since I like the Ken/Omi pairing so much, I like that you had them as lovers in the past, and at least acknowledged that possibility. Which leads to my question...What's going on with Ken and Schu? They'd be quite a....striking pair. And they do seem to get along wonderfully. Then again...he always got along with Yotan...and Schu and Yohji are personality-wise quite similar. Can't wait!!

    ~Tareacel
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  • From ANON - Melanie on December 07, 2004
    I love how often you update this story. Everytime I click on the link it's like Christmas! Anyways, to give a bit more of a substantial review, I really like the personalities and interactions you've given to the characters. There all very plausible, and it makes me happy :) Everytime I think of this story now, the first things that comes to mind is, oh good, someone's finally fixing the end of Gluhen and not doing a horrible job of it!
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  • From ANON - Melanie on December 07, 2004
    Eeeeeee! The ending on chapter five has made me so happy! It's so rare to find a fic that even acknowledges the existence of gluhen, let alone expands on it! I can't wait to read more. : )
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  • From ANON - Melanie on December 06, 2004
    I really like this story so far, I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - eMu3 on December 06, 2004
    i have to say I'm intrigued. i want more. i like where you're going, and the couples you've established work out well in my mind. i like how the plot is building. i know i'm a minority in preferring gluhen to the original series, but i have to admit the ending was a bit...unsatisfying and anticlimactic (understatement). i like your additions to the ending so far (ignoring the yohji marrying asuka thing, hey, your version could happen) but i was disturbed by yohji's nightmares (shudders at thought of creepy flowers with faces)
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