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By : KeiChan
  • From ANON - fanderichie on January 10, 2006
    I loved it! Please, update it soon *puppy dog eyes*
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  • From ANON - me on August 28, 2005
    that was incredible please update

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  • From ANON - Morvy_^ on June 20, 2005
    It's so great, I love it!!
    But please, update soon! :D
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  • From ANON - Sasunaru-kun on January 07, 2005
    YOU MUST WRITE MORE!!!! THERE'S NOT ENOUGH TOHMAxSUGURU IN THE WORLD, WITH A LEMON WRIITEN THIS WELL!!! AN AMATEUR??? UR LIKE A PRO!!!!
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  • From ANON - Ashley aka inumoon3 on January 02, 2005
    This is a really good beginning! Oh poor Suguru, only if Touma knew how he felt towards him, maybe it wouldn't be loveless sex! Well anyway update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - eMu3 on December 12, 2004
    i don't know what possessed me to read this...incest is not usually my thing. maybe it's that this particular family is so fucked up that incest seems plausible...at any rate, i do like the way you wrote suguru and tohma's reactions. tohma mentally calling suguru a slut when he snuck in there to seduce him was just perfect. it's such a psycho tohma thing to do. this should be an interesting read. i think you've got their family down pretty well (btw, for all the talk i do about how fucked up they are, i absolutely love tohma and suguru, i think they're really funny! i like 'em crazy!)
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  • From DivinePunishment on December 09, 2004
    Wonderful. =)
    I'm sure it was just because it was a beginning, but I think the lemon scenes should bea tad more drawn out and with more vivid and descriptive words in the future. Nevertheless, from what I read you are a great author with potential. Hope to read more of this and other stories from you.

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