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By : Marlingrl
  • From krys2007 on February 28, 2016
    It was new and I'm open-minded....I really enjoyed this story, and I love Hiko! Baka deshi!!!!!
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  • From Quickslice on November 30, 2013
    I must admit your plot are really good, but I really want to hold the idea of Kenshin being faithful to Kaoru. I don't want him to have another child with another woman, but I respect what you have in mind for this fic. Good work, thank you.
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  • From airen0920 on July 27, 2008
    First of all... i HATE you! i hated how you turned Kenshin into a rapist, i hate you for making this so difficult to digest, i hate you because i can't enjoy the lemony goodness of this story if it were about Kenshin and Miyori and most of all... i hate you for being so good and making me so addicted to your story! i hated the first parts, but i just can't resist reading it! Anyway, what i'm trying to say is, i DiD hate you... But now, i kinda love you... [the more you hate the more you love?] i have to admit, you are very good... And like you said, this story is very different from the other. i admire your handiwork! Sorry for the flames in the beginning... Anyway, keep up the good work!
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  • From sulou on March 06, 2008
    I Loved reading your story up to the very end. I honestly didn't think this one could possibly end well. Even so I continued to read, knowing I would probably regret it later. Well I couldn't have been more wrong. I loved the ending. It was a surprise and a relief to find my self smiling for a change.
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  • From ANON - Momo on January 06, 2006
    Aw, man! I was kinda hoping that Kenshin was going to kill him! so much for a dark chapter. che. Saito's plan was so unfriggin' believably simple, and predictable! why didn't kenshin even think of a way out?!?!??! (even if he was totally bogged down by all this crud going on! he coulda come up with an equally similar plan that Saito did!) gosh....

    Anyhoo... I totally dig this story so far, but I seriously was hoping for this to have been an uber dark chappie. your making the happy ending come too easilt. ~_~;;;;
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  • From ANON - AnimeMan on January 06, 2006
    That was great it maybe your best work ever.
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  • From LunarAlchemist on January 05, 2006
    Yay! Finally, an ending! You don't know how happy you made me! Now I'm kinda glad I was sick today and got to stay home to read this wonderful story... I was checking it almost everyday for soooo long... I love the ending, and I'm so glad that Hiko found someone, too. I'm not usually such a gushy reviewer... but I was waiting for sooo looooong, so it just makes it all the sweeter. :-) Thanks for finishing, and I look forward to more stories from you!
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  • From ANON - Kanzen ne Tsuki on January 04, 2006
    I may have guessed the plot, but it was a stellar ending. One of the best stories I've read. Sorry I haven't reviewed for a bit. I kept checking to see if you'd updated, and you hadn't. Then all of a sudden there's a butt load of chapters. WooHoo! Great way to spend a morning.

    God bless, sweeting.
    Looking for more from you. Hope the move goes well.

    tsuki-san
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  • From ANON - pinkmooncrystal on January 03, 2006
    Yaaayyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You've finally updated. I'm so happy!!! Oh my god the baby is born. What happens to Kenshin and Kaoru. I think that Hiko and Miyori would make a cute couple. Are you gonna try and get those two together? I hope so.
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  • From OriginalSinner on January 02, 2006
    Wow! How's that?! *poof* Just like magic a new chapter appears! You must've been online posting it just as I finished reading! *Twilight Zone music playing in background* Makes me a happy lil' sinner ~_^.... but now I gotta wait til you move and get settled for the next update which, if you're anything like me (I've just finished the manicly depressing task) could be months away! *argh!!!* No mind... that'll give me plenty of time to start my downloads and get into the series.... I'll be waiting though.....

    Peace and good luvk with your move ^_^
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  • From OriginalSinner on January 02, 2006
    Oh my.... I do like this.... kudos sweetpea on a very good job, especially since this is your first attempt. I have'nt actually seen any Kenshin episodes, but have vowed to make it a New Years resolution to get into it.... but your story animates the basic plot of the show quite well, if that makes any sense *doh!* Let me explain that a bit better.... your style of writing is very good and I'm able to grasp the basic concept of the show's plot, which only makes me want to run off and start downloading some episodes asap! Oh... and I like your creative use for those useless flames *lol* I think that's putting them to very good use yeah ^_^ but let's hope you won't be seeing too many of those... and if so... it'd just be sour grapes yeah cos this story is sweet!

    Happy New Years and looking forward to reading more ^_~
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  • From ANON - pinkmooncrystal on November 04, 2005
    oh i'm in much anticipation. Will kenshin tell them about the baby? What will come of Kaoru and Kenshin
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  • From ANON - Kanzen ne Tsuki on October 28, 2005
    Sorry to have been absent from you for so long, sweetling...

    I am so excited for the turns of this story. You have weaved the web so well... brilliantly, if I may say.
    I am waiting now for you to post what is certain to be a shattering climax. I can only imagine what Kenshin
    is going to do. It would be interesting if Hiko married Miyori and took the raising of Kenshin's child on his
    shoulders so Kenshin could have Kaoru... but that's quite a farfetched idea. :)

    Patiently waiting... wishing you the best with your carpal tunnel... that is so painful.
    God bless, dear friend.
    Tsuki-san
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  • From ANON - toysoldier on October 19, 2005
    this story was excellent. you held my interest from the very beginning. i can't wait to see what happens next. good luck with the illness and i'd also like to say that you are one of the most talented writers i've ever come across in the fanfic world. get well soon i'll be waiting for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 18, 2005
    Thanks for letting us know. I'm following about half a dozen or more really great stories that seem to all have been abandoned, so I'll keep this one on my list! Hope your CT issues get resolved in your favor. We can wait till you're well. :)
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