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Reviews for The Visitor

By : evileric
  • From ANON - Artemis on December 24, 2005
    THta was really hot...but also really sad...plese make more chapters so Asuka doesn't ahve to be mad at Rei anymore TT
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  • From hanyouinu on November 19, 2005
    Good! I really enjoyed it. :)
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  • From ANON - Kira-chan on November 18, 2005
    Reply to the first review: Circumstances can mean a lot in a fic like this, and with the explanation given I actually found Rei's actions to be kind of believable here...
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  • From ANON - engel on June 14, 2005
    Hmm... first time I've read a yuri Evangelion-fic. Can't say I don't like this, though. Asuka and Rei would be a nice pair, if they wouldn't hate each other.
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  • From Elsewhere on March 28, 2005
    This was quite good...dead harsh, of course, but still good. I agree with the person above, and I'm not so sure Rei would be willing to do something like this for such a reason, but hey, I can allow you some artistic liberty. ^_~ Good job!
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  • From ANON - Bobimus Prime on February 02, 2005
    I have read a story very much like this. although Rei did not turn OOC quite early into it. But yes, I like the way you turned the OOC back into IC. Liked it, I thought it was going to be a totally OOC Rei (unlike like my fics - bow before my hypocrocy). Anyway, liked it, dont stop, Asuka character being weak, like it, continue!
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  • From ANON - Watashinomiteja on January 25, 2005
    What can I say, I was hooked to a point. Asuka was, somewhat IC, but as all fanfics are, no one can be totally IC but the actual anime/manga. Though, the Asuka character i did enjoy, and the Misato appearance in the beginning with the beer somewhat amusing, but Misato never drunk in the mornings. Again, I understand it is your fic, you have freedom on what they do, but was the sudden change in Rei totally possible without a good reason? OOC to the max on Rei, yes, she uses the usual business-like-tone with Asuka to pilot her eva better, but would Rei honestly have sex to get to be better? Would she honestly think it would be at all a good idea, or even pointless to do it?
    I like the beginning relationship with Rei/Asuka, but, the Rei side is a little to forward, and the Asuka side a little too soft. For instance my fic, i understand i suddenly jump into it like you do, but I end up with reasons. I hope the follow chapters and fics to this series will make all the forwardness have a... "purpose" later on.

    I will continue reading, and I like your style so far.
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