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Reviews for Something in the blood

By : tenshijaki
  • From ShadowedDragon on March 30, 2008
    Wooow! Seras should never get drunk! And Alucard is such a snarky bastard isn't he? That was great though. Loved the part where Pip got his tongue stuck. I'm surprised Alucard didn't give him more hell for that though, but it was implied that he wouldn't let up on it hehe.
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  • From LunarAlchemist on April 15, 2007
    That was funny, and I laughed my ass off at the Anita Blake reference.. namely because I did the exact same thing in one of my fics. Great minds think alike, eh?
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  • From ANON - anna on December 20, 2006
    hi, i think that "can i sleep on you stomach" thing was the cutest come on i ever heard, and your fic was nice anyway :)
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  • From ANON - Erika on June 22, 2005
    that was AWESOME...I totally LOVED it...but oh man you should have just tried to write a little limey scene LOL...that was GREAT THANKS:D and if you do go back and write a lemon please let me know...THANKS:D
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  • From ANON - Erika on June 21, 2005
    Poor Sigmund...what would Anita do if she found out about that...LOL...that was GREAT I LOVED It...oh man and Poor Poor Seras that really sucked...oh man...that was really GREAT I especially loved her beating up on Alucard...LOL...but YIKES good thing he can survive just about anything cause that gun of hers is SCARY!!! but man the idea of her trying to beat him to a bloody pulp w/a stuffed penguin....I LOVED IT....THANKS:D
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  • From ANON - Sibby on January 26, 2005
    Awwww, no hot details. Bad girl. Need hot details.
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  • From ANON - lilly on January 07, 2005
    I gotta cookie ha ha! I liked the chapter i just wished it had more details cough cough ( lemon , lemon) i love romances. i hope you write another.
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  • From ANON - stina on January 06, 2005
    So flippin amusing, you have no idea, LMAO! Good job, havent read something like this in a long time.
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  • From ANON - lilly on January 06, 2005
    great story i loved it. i do hope you continue. i wanna read more please continue i hope alucard goes after seras, mabe he can try to delibrately get her tipsy. oh and give me a cookie i wanna cookie, sigmund is anita blake's stuffed penguin.
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  • From SilverFox on January 05, 2005
    Not bad, not bad at all... I would however recommend that you leave any explainations for the end or begining of your story. Like the comment about Anderson, you could have left it out completely and it would still have the desired effect.

    IE: ...vamp and one nut job priest wielding blessed swords.

    And the comment about Fly Me to the Moon. You could have said that it was the ending theme song for NGE in your ending Authors notes. It really ruins the flow of a story if you have to stop suddenly to explain something. It would be the same if the director of a movies suddenly broke into his film to explain why he did what he did. See?

    And you seem to have a lot of words in ' ' marks that don't need them. It puts unnecessary stress/emphasis on the word, and you do it way too frequently. Save that for when you are making a character say something with sarcasm. Like, if Seras was to say something like "Ok, 'Master' Integra." Or some such nonesense. See? But other than that, this was freaking hilarious. I can't wait to see if you are going to write a second chapter, it looks as if there is room for more with the way you ended this. My ultimate suggestion before posting it ( if you do decide to make a second chapter ) is to get someone to beta read it for you, that way he/she can catch any errors you may have. It looks like this story has a lot of potential to be very humorous with a dash of seriousness added for spice. Keep up the good work! Until next time!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - DreadNot on January 05, 2005
    I kept getting derailed by your author's notes inserted in the middle of the story. Very bad for the flow.
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