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Reviews for Broken

By : Kaie
  • From ANON - shuiede on February 24, 2007
    *sniff, sniff* goodness! I love reading your fics. Truthfully, I never anticipated much to read for the Lemon chapter. Reading the interplay of their dazzled emotions and how they had reacted to the given situation(especially Amon's) had me hooked up so much. For me, there's no need to have the lemon to back up for the readers to anticipate the story. The scene between Amon and Robin seeing each other for the first time after 5 years, Amon's rage and burst guilt, the emotions they had felt as they held each other's hand, oh...and the brief kiss Robin gave to Amon at the hospital just to make him relax, surrendering his guard and guilt....oh dear.....*sniff,sniff* they are simple actions yet produce so much great effect.

    create more fics, dear. I very much envy of the style of your writing. You have the gift. With lemons or not, spread it. :D


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  • From Sixela999 on October 03, 2006
    That was beautiful. It was worth the waiting between chapters. May I say perfect...
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  • From ANON - SMARTY on December 15, 2005
    SEQUEL PLEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEE.:p MORE MORE MORE MORE. HAHAHAHAHA
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on October 19, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Can you make a sequel please?
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  • From ANON - Buritani on August 02, 2005
    this is really kawaii, the lemon was excellent, not too graphic and extremely sweet and it completed an amazing fanfiction. I loved this and I think you are an amazing writer.
    keep it up!!
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 23, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Sparky16 on July 16, 2005
    That last chapter was PERFECT! I don't think it needed any more details. It was perfect. A sequal? Oooo! sparky would LOVE that! The story was sad and beautiful. A wonderful read! thank you for seeing it all the way though. I give this story a 10/10
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  • From ANON - Sparky16 on July 15, 2005
    Okay i've only been waiting FOREVER for this!!!! Good to see everything turned out for the better! so uh, when are you going to update? or are we going to have to wait months for that one too *eyes*

    UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!

    Don't make me beg!
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 19, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - PunkeeMonkee on June 13, 2005
    Your story is SO great, but you have a lot of pauses between your chapters(*sob*). Please write more; I really enjoy your story so far!

    P.S. Robin Sena rules.

    PUNKEEMONKEE
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  • From ANON - sexyharuka on June 03, 2005
    awwwwww..... that was soo good!!!!!! I absolutely LOVED it!! Please don't take too long with the lemon!!!!

    Once again, great!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 13, 2005
    Hmmm I would suggest writing too your own tastes what ever they might be. I vote graphic lemon for what it's worth.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on May 12, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Buritani on May 12, 2005
    oh, I've just read some of the other reviews, and I agree, something inbetween would be good, but pleas, not overly graphic
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  • From ANON - Buritani on May 12, 2005
    I don't know about everyone else, but I love AmonRobin, and I would really like to read a sweet, cute lemon instead of an overly graphic one
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