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Reviews for Dakishimete Itai

By : yasha1215
  • From LaNoinaa on May 22, 2009
    Grammar errors aside, this was really good!
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  • From airen0920 on July 29, 2008
    Time for the hunt! Lol! That was hot! Can't believe this is your first lemon! Although i have to complain about the grammtical errors. But it's still good... Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Niichan the Baka on December 23, 2005
    Oi, sorry this is Anon, don't have an account. Anyhoo, Love the Battousai, he's a great guy. And K/K is the best pairing in the series, in my opinion. Your story's nice, but you may want to look into getting a beta, or editing your story a bit better. Besides some grammer mistakes you also tended to switch tenses. It is wise to remain in one tense (preferably past tense since it is nearly imposible to write in present tense and do it well). Anyway, that's all, just work on your editing.
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  • From ANON - kim on August 01, 2005
    i loved it!
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  • From ANON - Makoto on February 25, 2005
    Not Bad! Everyone loves K+K. ^_^
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  • From ANON - K-Pilot on February 02, 2005
    Good story - nice lemon, good descriptions and it flows smoothly between scenes.

    Constructive Criticism - proofread or get a Beta. If English isn't your first language make sure the Beta is: a) a person who first language is English or b) speaks/reads/writes English extremely well.
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  • From ANON - De Lazy Lady Lime on January 24, 2005
    Hi!

    Yumm lemony goodness!! There were a few errors here and there but, over all a good lemon and a good read! Write more!!

    ~De Lazy Lady Lime
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