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Reviews for The Challenge of Five....

By : Kaystar87
  • From wingsofseyfert on June 07, 2010
    Sweet story and would make sense. Frieza is uber and he is a sick bastard. You portrayed things realistically though. Amy, with her smarts, would be valuable to Frieza as he is not dumb enough to kill of anything that would be to his benefit. I also liked the fact that Frieza saw Hotaru's potential and decided to keep her, possibly for testing or aptitude training.

    Mina seems to be in not so bad a position as well. Zarbon, though cruel when he has to be, has always been dignified and restrained, unlike his comrades like Dodoria and the Ginyu Special Forces. Mina may be forced to do Zarbon's bidding, but at this point, she is literally with the best alien out of the bunch. Restrained, civilized and good looking.

    I don't know who to feel worse for, Rei or Michelle. I mean, Rei is the sex toy of the cruelest bastard in the DBZ universe (yes, even more evil than Buu, Cell, Shenron, whoever) then again, Michelle has to be with the crudest and ugliest alien of them all in Dodoria.

    Though it is your story, I really don't want Goku or Vegeta involved romantically with the scouts. Been there, done that, don't know how many Goku screws Sailor Moon fics are out there. I don't mind Goku or Vegeta killing Frieza or being accomplices and help the girls escape but only that. The relationship between Zarbon and Mina though is nice and hope you flourish it.

    In all, good fic I hope you update it soon.
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  • From ANON - Kyo on November 06, 2005
    Ooooh, very intense! I love it! Please continue this, the next chapter should be very interesting.
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  • From ANON - BCross on August 06, 2005
    Wow, the first successful cross over of DBZ and SM I have ever read. I think it would be cool if you Had Bardock and Brolly in it to help the Senshi out while over throwing Freiza. I'm sure this will conclude in a way that will please the masses!

    Keep it up! And if you ever need ideas, you can ask me, I have undying millions of them, I'll gladly help.

    BCross
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  • From ANON - gfgdg on March 31, 2005
    pppplllleeeaasssweeesss review i need to know what happens next review review review or il report you i mean it youre fiction story is the best ive read

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  • From ANON - BabyZee on February 27, 2005
    What are the chances that Serena will get together with Vegeta and/or Goku? *_*
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on February 14, 2005
    Aah, is Zarbon getting sweet on pretty lil' Mina?:} Hehe... I somehow doubt he's gonna turn good, though. So, how about next time a quick comment onhotaru's current whereabouts, Michelle's, and, of course, Serena and Lita's. And possibly a *real* brief note on Darien. (I think we can all say worrying about Rini is rather moot at this point.) Update soon as you can and want!
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on February 13, 2005
    Ooh, nice pick up! And you finally got the Outers in the game! But why'd you have to kill Amara for, huh? I'm sure some of the Ginyu would have wanted to play with her, or maybe Frieza could have offered her as a gift to his "dear" big brother Coola. Ah, well, the rest are still alive. Of, course, that still leaves the question of where Darien is right now(dead, too, right?).
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on February 09, 2005
    Well, nice progress. Somehow, I just don't think Mina's gonna make it. And i can't help but wonder what's happened to Ami and Rei in the interim. And again, I must ask about Amara/Uranus, Michelle/Neptune, Trista/Pluto, and Hotaru/Saturn. Also, where's Darien? Surely he's still about, still has to catch up to Serena and Make Rini with her, after all. Unless you're planning on having Serena wind up with Goku and Rini winding up half-Saiyan! (Hmm, that could be interesting...)
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on February 08, 2005
    An interesting crossover you got going here. And eveyone's even in character! So, will Super Saiyan Goku arrive in time to save them? Or maybe one will bought Vegeta/ Nappa/Raditz? Maybe the Ginyu Force could show? And of course there's the Outer Scouts, Amara/Uranus, Michelle/Neptune, Trista/Pluto, and Hotaru/Saturn to consider, along with Kui and Dodoria. Actually, will Frieza's *dear* older brother and his three man personal squad pop up? Maybe, perhaps, possibly? Well, update soon!
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