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Reviews for Midnight Watch

By : pikari
  • From Uroki on February 03, 2009
    I really enjoyed this, it's quite good. Well written, good spelling (nothing takes away from a good story like bad spelling) Very well done. You may want to look pver it for double words and a fewinstances of 'the he' and such.

    I agree with you, there are not enough K/R fics, I love the pairing myself and you write both sides exceedingly well. an excellent use of Japanese too. Not too much, but enough. I applaud your writing skill and will be looking forward to the sequel.
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  • From ANON - anessa on August 03, 2006
    for your first yaoi fic that was SO good! you have no idea and I am surprised at the lack of yaoi pairings in here, it's sad really:/ anyway yeah I definetly loved it!_!
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  • From ANON - anime_junkie92 (Chiisai) on February 14, 2006
    WOW! That's one of the best K/R yaoi fanfics I've ever read. Plz keep writing. You can't really tell that's ur 1st. U should be very pround of ur self ^-^
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 11, 2006

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  • From ANON - Loki on January 10, 2006
    I really, really like this. The character dynamics are realistic (and cute!) and for your first yaoi scene it was incredibly hot. I'd love any sort of a sequel, or even another PWP featuring our boys. Thanks for the great work.

    ~Loki
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  • From ANON - Anonymous Miss on January 09, 2006
    Whoa... Really? This is your first yaoi fic? O_O *is impressed* For your first yaoi fanfic, you did a tremendous job. It was a sweet and romantic Ryou/Keiichiro story that really made me smile. (I, also, think that Ryou and Keiichiro make a cute pairing. lol) ^__^ The action flowed nicely at a reasonable pace. There was good imagery and word use. Etc... Basically, your story rocked! LOL

    Keep up the great work!

    Anonymous Miss
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  • From ANON - WICTEA on December 28, 2005
    NICELY WRITTEN. LOVED IT. I THOUGHT ABOUT THIS MYSELF. SOMTIMES DREAMED THAT THIS WOULD COME TRUE, BUT NOT AS DEEPLY. GOOD JAPP. TOO. KEPT STUDYING AND WRITTING.>
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  • From ANON - mew mew freak on October 28, 2005
    YAY i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^ ^-^ thankys

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  • From ANON - Lurel on August 28, 2005
    When I first saw your fic I was like, "OMIGOD!!! There's a RyouxKeiichiro fic in existence after all!" ^^ I read it and....................... It was frigen GREAT!!!!!!!!!! Hell yeah you should make a sequel! But you should make it kinda longer.... 'cause it's not everyday you come by a great story line and a talented author to write it! Sooooooo it'd be so cool if you could type up a nice 'n long fic, never end it and always update! ^^ heh heh heh you don't have ta listen to me but that would be so frigen awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! O_o I wuv you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >_< Ja'ne!



    Your new and ever devoted fan,
    ~Lurel
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  • From HizumisCrotch on August 18, 2005
    Great story, veeeery well written!! I loved it!! XD Keep up the good work and write more K/R!!! :DD
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  • From ANON - The fallen strawberry on July 02, 2005
    THIS STORY TOTALLY ROCKS!!!!!
    Dude (or chick..w/e) you gotta make anoter chap or something...
    I also agree, there needs to be more KeiichiroXRyou pairings...
    Maybe I'll try one ^.^;
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  • From ANON - Aiko Etsu on June 29, 2005
    Hiya!^^ I usually don't review the fanfics I read on here but I decided I just had to for you. I completely agree, there's not enough yaoi TMM fanfics with Keiichiro as seme. (not that I'm not open to the other way around) but I like to see the switch. I absolutely LOVED your fic!!!! You kept them well in character and still made it nice and yummy! *licks lips* I didn't look to see how many reviews you've gotten yet but I TOTALLY vote you write up that second part to this! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!! I'D TOTALLY LOVE YOU FOR IT!!! (NOT that I don't already love you for this chapter!) PLEASE UPDATE!
    Love you, e-mail me if you want. ^^
    *hugs*

    (amara_kou27@yahoo.com)
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  • From ANON - Tsuyomi on June 28, 2005
    There's so many good things to say about this fic I'm not sure where to start! For one, I enjoyed reading this. It is a well-written and tasteful lemon, something hard to come across these days. I like your writing style a lot; the descriptions were vivid and there was no visible grammatical errors. Overall, a wonderful job on your first yaoi fic! (I agree, there should be more TMM shonen ai/yaoi fanfiction!) I hope you do decide to write a sequel...I will look forward to it! :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 18, 2005
    Yay K/R! If you hadn't said anything, I'd have never guessed that was your first yaoi. You should definately write a sequel!
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  • From NihilEtNemo on June 05, 2005
    Wow.... The first TMM fic I've read... very nice. I watched like two episodes of the stupid kiddy americanized anime, and I wanted to write a fic about them, but I couldn't find out Keiicharo's name! (Gr!) Anyway... very nice. I have no critcism to offer.... I think it was perfect.
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