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Reviews for Keeping Up Appearances

By : aoi37
  • From ANON - Ysi on August 21, 2014
    Love it! Totally unexpected coupling in Zoicite and Haruka. But still a good story.
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  • From ANON - anonymous on November 15, 2008
    This was cute! An interesting pairing but well done. Good job!
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  • From BlueMoonRising on March 22, 2007
    It's 'Hotaru' not 'Hortaru'...
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  • From aoi37 on April 27, 2005
    I can take flames, but I will not tolerate insults:

    "If you like Haruka, why do you feel the need to turn her into a sniveling little wimp who can't even kick a couple of wannabe rapists' asses?"

    First of all, KUA was not about destroying Haruka in anyway, it was about her in being in a unique situation and seeing how she fares. I know Haruka could kick anybody ass any day of the week but in that part of story, I wanted Zoi to save her in a way that uncharcteristic of him. That's called plot and imagination. Learn it.

    "If this is what sleeping with men does to you, then I'm a lesbian from this moment on."

    If you feel like being a lesbian means a weakness in away then you're an ass and I'm sure they'll reject you anyway.


    "Haruka is tough; Zoisite's the one who'd be afraid to punch someone, in case he broke a nail. Deal with it, or find another series to write about, you twit. "

    First of all you deal with it, you stupid bitch. There's a term call creative license and this a fanfic. That means I can write about who ever, when ever, how ever and you can choke on it

    "You know, it IS possible for the woman to be the stronger half of a couple - it's not even uncommon. Do you have a problem with women being able to take care of themselves? If so, you're just a sexist jerk and need to grow up."

    I am all for womens's empowerment, I am a woman after all. Yeah, genius. I take care of myself and you're the one who needs to grow up for letting a fanfic rile you up because you everything did not go like you wanted. It would have been fine if you did not result to name calling and personal insults. Next time be more constructive and hit the Go back button.


    "For the benefit of your possibly-existent girlfriend I'll add that most women do not orgasm just because you move something in and out of their vagina (ever heard of the clitoris?)"

    The question is, have you?

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  • From ANON - Sailor Star Dust on April 25, 2005
    That was interesting. I prefer the Haruka/Michiru pairing to fics about them with anyone else, but I really liked the idea of bringing the stereotypical butch woman feminene male together. Interesting twist.

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  • From ANON - Lavode on April 25, 2005
    If you like Haruka, why do you feel the need to turn her into a sniveling little wimp who can't even kick a couple of wannabe rapists' asses? If this is what sleeping with men does to you, then I'm a lesbian from this moment on.
    Haruka is tough; Zoisite's the one who'd be afraid to punch someone, in case he broke a nail. Deal with it, or find another series to write about, you twit.

    You know, it IS possible for the woman to be the stronger half of a couple - it's not even uncommon. Do you have a problem with women being able to take care of themselves? If so, you're just a sexist jerk and need to grow up.

    For the benefit of your possibly-existent girlfriend I'll add that most women do not orgasm just because you move something in and out of their vagina (ever heard of the clitoris?)
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  • From ANON - Casper on April 19, 2005
    Strangely enough.. I really enjoyed it. Your writing style is very good and the story was.. intriguing.. and hot, but that's besides the point... Can't wait to see something more from you!

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  • From PrincessNC17 on March 28, 2005
    JUST THOUGHT ABOUT THIS. YOUR TITLE FOR THIS STORY Keeping Up Appearances IS THE SAME AS A OLD BBC COMEDY TV SHOW. RANODM FACT.
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  • From PrincessNC17 on March 28, 2005
    WOW! 1 OF THE BEST IDEAS I HAVE SEEN FOR A PAIRING FUCKING AMAZING!!
    KEEP WRITTING!! I LOVE SALIOR MOON!!
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  • From ANON - deep serenity on March 24, 2005
    part 3 writing gets better with every chap, try not to rush your stories though, good job
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  • From ANON - Li on March 19, 2005
    I loved it. At first, I read the whole "Haruka/Zoicite" sinario and was all "But it'd never work out" and logical. But the story was really great. Beautifully written.
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  • From ANON - DEEP SERENITY on March 18, 2005
    CHAP 2, NOT bad, overall it was(the writing and storyline) better then chapter one. Good job!
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  • From ANON - Moon-Daiuske on March 17, 2005
    AAhhh that was perfect! Great job. I am glad that you decided to finish it. Keep up the great work! I will expect many more wonderful things from you. :)

    ~Moon-Daisuke
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  • From ANON - lainofthewired on March 16, 2005
    Cute story ^^ A most original pairing, and kinda WAFFy. Great job!
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  • From ANON - Deep Serenity on March 15, 2005
    Pretty darn good!, very different and interesting. Will read other three chaps later.

    Though I think you should revise the 1st part, it's both of their first times with the opposite sex need more clear detail and feelings expressed(my opinion)

    Anyway Amara is one of my Fav charaters! so I look forward to reading more
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