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Reviews for This I promise You

By : Chocho
  • From Penelope on August 03, 2011
    This is really good. It really cracked me up, the whole hermaphrodite thing. Where did you get that idea. Anyway it's awesome.
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  • From ANON - Julianne on June 19, 2006
    Dun dun dun. I'm only on the second chapter but I really like this, I like you're writing style (probably because it's similar ;P) I also really really really like how you showed the creepy neighbor's PoV. That really added to the effect.
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  • From ANON - Kelly on January 19, 2006
    I finished it and I'm here to review again, like I promised. ^^ I'd would like to apologize for my previous rant. I siezed to keep in mind that this is fan FICTION; sorry for going all techinical on you! :P Anyway. I absolutley loved it. I'm going to go check out the sequel right now. I'm sure it'll be just as great, if not even better!

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  • From ANON - Kelly on January 17, 2006
    I'm sorry I haven't read this whole fic yet so I might be a little biased, but I just got to ch. 14. If Shuichi were a hermaphadiote(sp) then he could only get pregnant through artificial insemenation, because if they are having anal sex there is no way that the semen could reach all of the female parts. Also if you meant to imply he was bleeding from his rear, that would be impossible because the instestines are in no way connected to the uterus. I'm sorry for that little rant, but I am enjoying this fic so far but that part just... threw me off. I'd also like to suggest that you consider getting your future fics beta'd. I think that you are an excellent writer and have a creative mind, it just kinda sucks to see misspellings and typos here in there. Nice job so far, I'll review again when I complet this fic. Soyonara! =)
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on January 15, 2006
    Hi. Just wanted to say two things about this. #1 - It was a really great story and I loved almost the whole thing. 'Almost' leads me to #2 - Why in the Hell did you keep calling Shuichi Shu-han?? Shu-"HAN"? WTF? Shu-CHAN I could understand but Shu-han made no sense at all. The first time I saw that in here I thought it was just a typo but it kept showing up. It got really irritating seeing this over and over again. For me, it really detracted a lot from the story - too distracting. Other than this, shall we say 'misspelling', the story was very compelling and well written.
    Koneko
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  • From ANON - tsuki on December 16, 2005
    wow.this is one of the best stories i've ever read.i read it all in one day and it was really beautiful.hope you would write a sequel(pretty please?)!!=)
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  • From Ashcat on October 28, 2005
    Chpt 27 et al: Ok, so I stuck with the story despite my initial reaction to chpt 14, and hey it couldn't have been that bad since its 3AM and I stayed up to finish it despite work in the morning. I think you handled the mpreg aspects better than a lot of people have, and you didn't go overboard on his "symptoms"which I really appreciate! I think you are a good writer, but did you really mean crocodile tears every time you used it? Overall though, it was very entertaining and a I was glad that you didn't fall into the memory loss trap or too much angst, it was cool to see a happy ending. I think you could do some funny one shots/sequel stuff with twins! Good luck in school!
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  • From ANON - Ashcat on October 28, 2005
    CHpt 14: ok.. What the fuck are you doing?! I had to stop at the h?! part! WTF?!?!?! I have patiently went alone with this story, but this is just too much I had to review! Argh! why do so many stories have to go back to that?! this was a cool evil fan story, why did you do this?! *sighs in resignation and returns to story*...
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  • From ANON - Hitomi on October 07, 2005
    How did Shuichi give birth like this??? I mean, does he have a vagina???? And how could Eiri not notice it if that's the case. Ok, he was a hermaprodite...but come on! If he had a vagina Eiri would have to notice, right?? Or the babies came out of his anus???
    The beginning was pretty good, all the angst and crazyness of Rinjin, but the ending was totally absurd.
    It seemed to me that you wanted to end this story no matter what and you rushed the end without caring for any logic.
    What a pity.

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  • From FuKouHei on September 25, 2005
    That was SO good! I'm so sad its over, but at the same time I'm happy its complete. I hope you have a good time with your other story and maybe make a sequel to this one.........
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  • From ANON - Hells Angel on September 24, 2005
    i loved your story and i hope you write more i would love to read them
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  • From on September 24, 2005
    Great chapter!!! I can't believe it's finally over, you have to write more! YOU HAVE TO WRITE A SEQUEL PLEASE!!!!! THIS STORY IS THE BEST! Or at least some one-shots on the twins! Well hope to read more from ya soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - catmum56 on September 22, 2005
    Aaawww - that was so sweet. I like the babies' names. And that sneaky Eiri - wants more babies, eh? Hmmmm. Better watch out, Shuichi. Nice wrap-up for this story. An excellent first story. Looking forward to many more. :)
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  • From ANON - Jaina Uesugi on September 22, 2005
    OMG!! xDDDDD I loved it. It's amazing. Ahhhh! I can't believe it's over....>>; or is it? Anyways, I can dream can I x3 Wonderful work. I'll be telling millions of people to read your amazing stories till the day I die. Wonderful work. -reads the whole story- =3
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  • From ANON - xunxin on September 22, 2005
    ...........................
    Hahahahhahahahahahahaaha!
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    watermelon, hahahahahah!
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    bunny food, hahahahahahahahaha!!
    ..............................
    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
    Oh! what did the second baby look like?
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