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Reviews for Mechanical Men

By : DeniPie
  • From ANON - ^_^ on November 11, 2006
    whoa this fic is extremely interesting

    i actually dont even know too much about this series but i was intrigued by the idea.

    very very interesting. i love that you can actually write. not many fics here are of much quality but yours definitely was very interesting and well written.


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  • From ANON - Another Commentator on January 10, 2006
    I love this story. Wish there was more of it. But anyways, every now and again, I come back and reread this story, and every time that I reread it, the funniest part is always,

    " The tip of his tongue slipped across his lips as he gave his groin one last grind against her nether lips before slipping back to thrust into her.

    “Ah! FUCK!”

    Dorothy blankly watched Beck rear away from her so fast he fell backwards off the bed altogether. Upon hearing the curses and whimpers continue up from the floor she rose to her knees to crawl to the edge of the bed. Looking down she saw the lengthy man curled into a fetal position clutching at his groin, his face red and cursing vehemently.".

    I dont know if it is the same for everyone else, but I cant help but laugh at this.
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  • From ANON - Effervescent Mania on December 18, 2005
    i've been a fan of this fic for some time now, so forgive me for making it seem like i'm having doubts... but um... a lot of times people expect the way a person talks outside of formal writing to match their skill when they ARE writing. in your case, your casual speech makes you seem a lot less skilled a writer than you apparently are. and a lot of the time, this is the first tipoff that a fic has been ripped off from someone else. i don't think this is the case for you, because i've looked extensively on the internets and have never seen it with anything other than your name on it (don't be offended by that, it's just a reasonable thing to wonder, i think), but... whenever i see your casual chatspeak i always cringe a little. i guess what i'm advising you to do is adopt a little more professionalism in your type-speech... which would avert the assumption that "oh, this person types like a twelve-year-old AOLer, so there's no way she could've written this amazing a fic." just my two cents.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 08, 2005
    Gotta love Dorothy! Still, where the hell is Roger? Lol. Anyway, good story.
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  • From ANON - alicia on July 03, 2005
    Man...that was more funny than anything! I reviewed your Samurai Champloo fanfic and I find this one to have alot more humor in it. Maybe it's just finding out how far a man will go to get off. Great writing though and can't wait for next installment :)
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  • From ANON - Gemini on April 10, 2005
    BECK????!!!! Of all the idiots in the world it had to be Beck!? Well...at least it wasn't Rosewater...*ewww* Anyway, it was o.k. I'm not a Beck fan though. Do you think you could make one with Roger and Dorohy? But at least give her the proper genitalia with some pleasure sensers for goodness sake. By not having that in the story you took out half the fun! Oh! And if you decide to do that make Roger a nice guy o.k.? How 'bout and actual "I love you." That helps too.
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  • From Xel on March 31, 2005
    Funny, clever, and devious. The level of technology presented here is a liiitle bit beyond that of Paradigm City, but that's hardly the important thing, is it? I enjoyed this terribly. Do update with the next chapter soon.
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