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Reviews for Creeping Down Corridors At Midnight

By : Meirav
  • From Telros90 on June 29, 2011
    A very well-done story. I'll start off with my issues with it, and then my praise. Seems fair to me; get the stuff that hurts out of the way and end on a good note.

    Fortunately, my issues are few and small. The formatting seemed a bit sketchy and off at times, and you had code at places where it was unfinished. It's a heck of a lot better than some stories, where the text is unreadable because there is code everywhere in it. However, this could simply be something you missed, or not being totally used to the code used here. It doesn't detract from the story at all, mostly a finesse issue if you will.

    That's all I have for complaints, bravo!

    What was good about the story was the pacing, the characterization and the slow build up to the revelation of what was happening to Schrodinger, along with your delicious meta use of the phrase "I don't know....."

    The story was paced well, following the werecat's journey throughout the ship, noting the relationships between himself, the other 'werewolves', and each other. The characterization of each was well done, even if they didn't have any dialogue. The build up to the what the Major was doing and the Doc's role in it, plus Schrodinger's confused and silent pain, along with the Captain's action was superb. We feel for these characters and connect to them in ways we do not in the manga or OVA.

    A well done piece and one that sticks with me. And in the end, that's what counts.
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  • From KiraFan05 on March 05, 2011
    Very well done. The tale you told, while dark, was inspired. Good work.
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  • From loveyourflyingv on July 25, 2008
    Loved it! Amazing ending.
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  • From ANON - shade on February 12, 2006
    oh, wow. this is really good, kinda sad, but still good. Do you think you could add more chapters to it please????
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  • From ANON - empress_eerian_sadow on January 17, 2006
    so beautifully sad. i wanted to cry.

    very well written. you made him feel very real.
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  • From ANON - Al on October 10, 2005
    .....that was great!!!!!!! omfg you must continue it!!!! i demand it
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  • From ANON - Kainonis on September 02, 2005
    Sorry, my last comment was a little rushed, I was busy. I really did want to leave a real review. ;) I honestly do love stories about the nazis, since there are so few. I myself am a Schrodinger/Captain fan (I'm writing a story for them, as a gift to someone), so ths story is quite well done. I like how everything is implication, the shonen-ai and the bond between them.

    Kudos.
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  • From ANON - Kainonis on September 02, 2005
    I loved it, but a nitpick.

    Schrodinger is a werecat, not a werewolf. I know his ears aren't catlike, but eh. Hirano himself confirmed that he was a werecat at a convention. 'Werewolf' is a rank, since both Schro and Rip were called 'werewolf'. ^^
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  • From ANON - Chendalia Choiseul on July 26, 2005
    I've been looking for something like this, with Millennium in it, for a long time now. And it was a REAALLY hard search. So of course it was twice more nicer when the result of my search was this damn well written. This was really touching, this beautiful little ficlet of yours. So it would be very very nice if you would write more fics like this... *hint hint* ^^;
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  • From ANON - Sure-bu on July 19, 2005
    That was pretty different!! I liked it alot. Especially the whole deal with going through people's rooms, it was very interresting! I also like the relationship that Schrodinger and the Captain had.. It was very sweet!! ^_^ ^_^
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  • From ANON - Dionne on May 12, 2005
    I read your story when it was on Fanfcition.net. This is still a kick ass story and you should keep writing it! I still don't know what they were doing to Schrodinger and like the one guys said: I would be cool to see a sequel! PLease write another sequel! Schrodinger is my favorite character and I like reading stories about him! This story just made me like him more! ~Schrodinger Fan.
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  • From ANON - ZombieDuke(not logged in) on May 09, 2005
    This story has now made me a fan of the Captin/Wolf boy(his name escapes me at the moment) coupling~!
    So sweet, so innocent and trusting. Poor pup, poor Captin.
    Bloody brillant by the way!
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  • From ANON - irenadel on April 06, 2005
    Wow, what a wonderful story, so very insightful in the dinamics of the Millenium group. the pairings were executed with magistral logic, the use of the rooms to illustrate character was fantastic AND ^_^ I always knew Schod was the Major's little catamite. It's just sooooo appropriate! Ok so inappropriate. My poor poor baby were! T_T so did not deserve it!

    Is there any hopes for a sequel? yes? we love you and shall worship and Schod!fiction isn't abundant? *licks* I like you so!

    ^_^ I also have to admire the beautiful werewolf characterization, one of the most powerful remainders of a character's inhumanity is their perception, it makes them so much more real, so much more tangible *_* wonderful work!
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  • From ANON - Raphael on April 04, 2005
    Aw. Poor Schro. It hurts to read about one of my favorite characters hurting him. o_o I'm glad captain's there anyway. Very nice. I would like for you to continuie it. ^^ I want to see what the captain does afterwards. Kick the majors ass Hans! Yes, I know its the type of fiction that can be laft at and end there but it would make a lovely long term story!
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