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Reviews for Distraction

By : Purplepenguin
  • From ANON - Serendepity on August 15, 2006
    i liked it. I just have one question= How do you know Ryo is older than Dee?
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  • From ANON - Bard\'s Apprentice on November 06, 2005
    dude! this totally rocks! XD Ryo may be a little OoC, but hey, the attitude makes up for it. ^_~
    i thought he'd want to make absolutely sure Dee was was emotionally focused on ONLY him too before distracting him with hot sex. *shrug*
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  • From ANON - dazzteddybear on November 03, 2005
    This was Fun!!!=) I really like it!!! Anymore where this came from?????????
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  • From ANON - ryde on October 06, 2005
    That was... Something so.... CCCCCCCCCCCCCUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But one problem, in your describing you told that it's M/M/M, and that means their's three man going at it... ^~^U So would you please repair that little ichy-bichy mistake? Or did you think that it's Ryo/Dee/Ryo? (Or Dee/Ryo/Dee? Suit for your self..)
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  • From ANON - C.X.Z on July 31, 2005
    Bravo! That was one of the cutest short Fics I think I have ever read. Honestly it was great. wasnt slow, didnt drag on and didnt make the usual WTF!? expression appear on my face.... although you should watch what your doing when you edit it, and make sure to re read
    (They calloused, Dee moved to lie beside Ryo so as not to crush him.) thats the kind of mistake a computer wont catch. And after a while they get annoying to the reader. Special when every time the author writes forward it comes out towards (26 fucking chapters of that mistake! how does that happen? *evil glair*)

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