Click Here!

Reviews for Concessions

By : lawless
  • From ANON - Arya on August 08, 2005
    Aw. Megumi's sweet when she's vulnerable. Her usual strength makes the rare times when she lets us see her brief moments of insecurity stand out more.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - fox-san on June 17, 2005
    Too beautiful for any words of mine to even describe.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Kireiko on June 12, 2005
    *sigh* sasuga wa, lawless-san!! Waiting with anticipation, this chapter did not disappoint!! but shame on you... another cliffhanger! ara, ara... well, as long as you keep updating, I'll keep waiting with bated breath ne? It is well worth the wait. Keep up the excellent work. Good job, awesome chapter as always... Don't worry about taking too long to update, you're busy, life happens, I understand. I'd rather wait for a good quality chapter rather than something rushed. I appreciate all the effort and time you've taken so far... *hug* (can't speak for everyone, but hopefully they agree... )

    Always looking forward to upcoming chapters, and thanks for updating!

    ~Kir
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Lara on June 12, 2005
    Love your story but you already know
    Report Review

  • From ANON - meg-chan on June 09, 2005
    Beautiful chapter, very vivid emotions
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on June 04, 2005
    Cool, it has just about all my favorite characters and a good plot. There's far too much KK and AM pap in this place and not much else so keep writing!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - sanodevil on June 02, 2005
    beautiful chapter, great written skills. I´m wanting for the good part
    Report Review

  • From ANON - SoUiChIrO on May 25, 2005
    Hey i like the whole story i just have hard time adding the words in your story to my computer database can you please review my story Ex'Driver New Driver thank you
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Kireiko on May 20, 2005
    Nice, very nice, lawless-san!! Good chapter! I wouldn't worry about the length of the chapter, I myself was sad it ended when it did!! *grin*
    Question though? I was confused about the hashish thing... until I read that Megumi had a pair too? Just pointing out (in stagevoice whisper of course *wink*) I believe that chopsticks are "hashi" in romanji... I think... Anyways, Lovely chapter! Can't wait to see what unfolds next!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anubis on May 17, 2005
    0_0! Well, I never expected Sano's love confession to be like that. I thought it had to be dragged and beaten from him but sine he's going nuts over Megumi already, it seems apt somehow that you wrote it this way. It doesn't change the fact that I'm still a bit disgruntled about it, but its fading already as I write this review. The fact that the next chapter is going to be posted VERY SOON is enough to erase the feeling completely. We readers ask too much, don't we?...hehe. Please do keep on writing. We're looking forward to the next chapter. Rock on!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Sachi on May 16, 2005
    That was sad!
    So very sad!
    Hope the two of them work things out very quicklly.
    Very good chapter!


    Report Review

  • From ANON - Sanodevil on May 16, 2005
    Amazing chapter, great Sano & Megumi kiss, please update soon, you have to write more Sano and Megumi fics, they are phew.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anubis on May 11, 2005
    Hayah...another cliffhanger.*growl* My thoughts preempt your story, I apologize. I was expecting Sano to ravish her then and there. But then the tension building in your story is better. Loads better. Have you any idea how hard it is to restrain oneself from asking a particular author to hurry it up and get on with the next chapter already? Oh, oops, pretty please with sugar on it? heheh. Rock on.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - sanodevil on May 10, 2005
    You did a execellent job, this storie is so real that you can feel in your heart the emotions that the caracters are feeling. You are a true writter
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Kireiko on May 08, 2005
    Wow, lawless-san! Quite a good read you've got here. I was so surprised to reach the end of your chapters so soon... *waaah* I stumbled across your story and having never come across it before, I read what you had in one go... Nice storyline, good build-up and nice backdrop. Can't wait for more!! *grins* As for the SXM moments.... ano ne, such a story teasewhore! (of course, I didn't mean to imply that you are any kind of whore, it was just a figure of speech - don't hurt me!!)

    Looking forward to upcoming chapters, and keep up the good work!
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!