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By : evileye2
  • From Lyfe on June 27, 2007
    This was really out of the ordinary. I mean, it's not everyday you see the Pokemon characters lose their sanity and Misty is quite surprisingly, no exception. We all know how dearly she cares for Ash but to go that far, is really twisted! I almost thought Ash would have died a while after Brock. Poor Brock, got killed with a baseball bat. I can see why these kinds of ficts are called dark fics; they exude strong angst and tragedy and lots of MA that will NEVER be suited to the younger audience. Quite surprisingly, it did not disturb me at all. Maybe because I already have a bit of a dark heart for these things; I'm used to things like this.
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  • From ANON - Nirvana-X on January 07, 2007
    FLAME! FLAMEFLAMEFLAMEFLAMEFLAMEFLAME!!!!!!!!! (Just Kidding)
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 30, 2006
    whoa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kiya on August 27, 2006
    That was absolutely heartbreaking! It was very well written. Hope I didn't disapoint you too much. ^_~
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  • From ANON - LuceOmbra on August 10, 2006
    While I like the story, is there anyway this could be more than a one shot?
    Just asking...
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 09, 2006
    m
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  • From ANON - Shaliva on August 08, 2006
    Thats so sad. T_T
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  • From ANON - yurific on February 01, 2006
    yes and no it was good and bad at the same time .it was weird and scarey

    but it dident have details and it should be rated R not nc-17
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 09, 2006
    hehe
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  • From ANON - The Bunny Under Your Bed on January 02, 2006
    Oh dear... this scared me quite a bit. Ash, getting raped... by... Misty. It sent shivers up my spine. I mean, it did scare me a bit, but it was still very entertaining. Most of the part's in the fic are very detailed, and I like that. Brocks death... *sigh* Misty, totally insane... and poor... poor... Ash. It's just wow, how you put all of this together. Great story-line.

    - ---♥ The bunny Under Your Bed
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  • From ANON - andrew kirby on December 23, 2005
    mistys a slut and i think shes mean. not enough lemon dude
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  • From ANON - WhiteRaven on December 07, 2005
    okay... well, it's pretty good, but there are a few things wrong, first, Misty couldn't overpower Ash. I'm not being Sexist, I'm just saying, seeing as Ash has broken metal on several occasions(Mewtwo Strikes Back, and the Baby Lugia Saga, to name a few.) I highly doubt Misty could overpower Ash, and also, you really might consider... ahh... adding more detail.
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  • From ANON - fsfsf on November 16, 2005
    actually it was pretty good, in a strange crazy way
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  • From ANON - Tak01 on November 14, 2005
    Hmm, I think I might do my own "Misty is evil" fic in the future.

    Anyway, as for the story: it's good in parts, and well described in parts, but in others--mainly near the end--it feels as if things were rushed to much and could be rewritten. A few things, mainly: Brock's death and anything after that point, really; the part with Ash's rape; some of the scenes where Misty punishes Ash could be more detailed, such as his feelings, etc. Speaking of that, Misty easily beating up Ash and overpowering him is pretty realistic considering her tomboyish nature--but, as mentioned, it'd sound better if it had more detail and background in it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 13, 2005
    all i can say is........wtf??
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