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Reviews for Moonlight

By : xerosky
  • From ANON - Rowina on February 12, 2006
    Man, XE, I didn't know you'd written Saiyuki smut! *drools, fainting* Gods, you write such class, I feel like an idiot trying to review. You've pegged Gojyo's sentimental side, and Hakkai's deeply disturbed one, and it just rings so true. I love the reference to a "Hakkai smile" as opposed to a real one. All the dynamics here just click and whirl with magical symmetry, and it's refreshing, because I haven't read this pair and HxS that way before. And of course, your dialogue sings, every note true. Your descriptions--you can take a worn out metaphor or turn of phrase, and quirk it into something so right. In all, what an enormous pleasure to read some of your words that I hadn't before. *spork* that was for everything in progress. Make it happen!
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  • From ANON - Konriar on May 18, 2005
    Well-written yaoi fics. A rare pleasure. Thank you.
    I do prefer Hakkai as the uke though. Great characterization, and especially good use of voice in the narration.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 18, 2005
    God damn. wow it's been a good long while since i've read anything that good. hmm...I wouldn't count on it. yep great fic.
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  • From ANON - Cupnjava c[~]~~~*sip* on May 12, 2005
    Sorry it took me so long to read and review this. I’m so far behind. Stupid, huge, useless paperweight on my desk.

    Whew.

    I thoroughly enjoyed this. I think you presented a side of Hakkai sexuality that is often neglected or denied in fanfics. I also like the “duality” of Hakkai’s sexual tastes and orientation. Not many people can present blood play and this type of darker sexuality in such an unassuming way. Excellent job with that.

    I loved the ending two lines. So incredibly IC for both of them—makes me laugh and laugh. Bravo.

    I wanted to point this out. “The difference between us, of course, is that I'll fuck him even though he's male, and he'll fuck me because I am male.” That is an excellent coin of phrase. I loved that. I read it and re-read it several times. Subtle and yet very clear. Great job.

    One suggestion, I haven’t checked so you may have done this. Try your hand at third person POV. Even if you don’t use true omnipresent voice, give it a shot. I think you’d do rather well with it. You’d be able to flush out the other perspectives. For this piece Gojyo POV is the way to go, including the others would have bogged it down. I just think you would do rather well with third person POV and wanted to suggest it.

    Thank you so much for sharing.

    Cupnjava c[~]~~~*sip*

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  • From ANON - Jamie on May 02, 2005
    *Grins* I was grinning like a Cheshire cat at the parting scene, lol.
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  • From ANON - TaraYuki-Uesugi on April 26, 2005
    That was bloody awesome!!! Extremely well written!! Ya know when i read fics that are as fantastic as ur's I can never think of anything to say. It literally leaves me speechless.(and thats saying something) I love it! What more can I say?
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  • From ANON - Quirk on April 10, 2005
    I like. Ooooooooooooh, I like. A mix of everything- blood lust, sweet and morals. Cool pov. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Turin on April 09, 2005
    What a new perspective on the two! n_n and nice pacing and all! n_n Great work!

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  • From Vampyress on April 09, 2005
    Oh, that was... That was superb! It was really hot, but more than that I just loved the way you painted Gojyo. You established him so clearly and effortlessly, I even heard his voice reading it in my head.

    Write more? Please? So I don't have to stalk you? =3
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