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Reviews for One Night for kite

By : Redknight
  • From ANON - Taker on January 13, 2006
    *Darth Sidious/Emperor/Palpatine Impression* Good. Excellent. *End Impression* I like the name the most, keep it UP! HAHAHA I make pun!
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  • From ANON - Hunter on January 02, 2006
    Hey man. You might want to do a spell check,but be sides that was the best on i've ever read.
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  • From ANON - bakunama on July 02, 2005
    Damn, your grammar sucks. Makes it very hard to understand.
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  • From ANON - Shiron on June 20, 2005
    You have a real talent for fanfics. This is one of the best I've read this week. Keep writing fanfics, you really know how to make a good one.
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  • From ANON - Unenlagia on June 05, 2005
    we NEED more Kite/Blackrose ficcys yours is like the only one
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  • From ANON - Eddie Gurraro on May 08, 2005
    Sorry, wrong story, I meant to say to you that it was excellent! I gave you a 5, it's that other story bellow I gave the 1!
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  • From ANON - Eddie Gurraro on May 08, 2005
    Hey holems, this isn't Inuyasha, this is .hack essay! I gave you a 1 because it's not in the right place
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  • From ANON - Daedalus on April 15, 2005
    ...This isn't the best BR and Kite pairing, lots of horrid misspellings, which made me skim past a lot of it. Also, they just don't flux...There's something to think about. Fluxuation. And I'm really not sure, but is that even a real area? If not, that was a poor make, and a legend that was also not very creative. Even for the creators of .Hack//Sign.

    Your sentence structure was also bad, I couldnt tell who was speaking, and I couldn't tell WHEN they were speaking. Sentences should really begin with " and end with " followed by (at least) said insert name here.

    Try to improve the writing, and make an update. It'd also work better if it were slightly longer, too. That's not meant to be a bad thing, either. But no one really says kool anymore but kids of 11...
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